What happened to Lily?! Well, I think I prefer this anyways... :P His obsession over Lily was rather scary.

That definently was a beautiful story. The words just flowed, as though you were merely picturing the scene in your mind and the words just described, in magical detail, the scene you had created.

Hmm! That was very interesting! Thats the first realli lovey dovey type of fic i have read between snape, and someone else! The writing was consrtucted well to, and it didnt seem to speed along to fast! :d

This is wonderful! So well written, and sad on many levels. I love that you did not go in the direction I thought you would, with some sort of melodramatic kiss or promise of love or something of the like. It's going on my favorites list.

Twit. Why didn't you tell me? Hmph. I could have beta-read for you. Hmph. Not that it NEEDS any beta reading. Hmph. I'm going to pout over this for a while, you know. Hmph.

That said, good story. Short and different than your usual - and very good. The animated corpses were creepy. Very creepy. I don't particularly like Severus / Narcissa pairings, but it's certainly got some good canon support.

And I can't think of any more to say. Well, except for a plea for you to email me, but that's rather pathetic content for a review. Here's something better:

I liked it. Good job.

Light and Balance,

Smile at the Sun

its pretty good

A well-deserved award. You handled that with subtlety.