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| csimouse 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseI just found this. Good job! |
| Vanilla Slash 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseLove that ending! I was half expecting Warrick to say "Wow. That was hot!" |
| BandG33K2008 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abuseGreat, Please continue it with Grissom, Greg, and Nick's reactions. |
| Shay58 2005-11-06 ch 1, | abuseGreat job, for someone who doesn't have much experience of this in real life, keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to more so please continue with their story. |
| Rainbow Prism 2005-10-20 ch 1, | abuseI could actually see this as if I were watching it! Loved the characterizations; they were dead on ;) Warrick's made me lol! Men! Would love to read more, but this stands on its own quite nicely. |
| HopeGrace - MLH 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuseHi This is so funny, I love it. could you please write a sequel or something? |
| icklebitodd 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abuseyou made me smile after a crappy day. hope you decide to conitue and therefore update soon :P:) |
| charmed1818 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat job!Loved it! :) |
| twinferal 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abuseHey great story. i like this one just as much as the others. Keep up the good work. Kristiana |
| Cherrydrops12 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abusewow, i love it, its so cool, plz tell me there will be more, and for a first of this nature, hell is it good |