Reviews for The Border Wars Ver 2

Madhatter45 2007-09-24 ch 1,	abuseToo tell good stories, now I'm intersted in how a dragonballz story would come out if you writed it. But don't make it about war! No wait make it about war! Like have Vegeta take over the earth, and like make alot of plot twists and then like, have Bulma try to run away, and like Vegeta tries to find her, and like he does, and then it can just be about the hell she goes through living with him...wow that's kinda sad that I find stories like that entertaining...i'm one messed up chick...oh well I think you should write the story!!
Conqest 2007-09-19 ch 1,	abusewhat the hell is this crap. sorry man but what the hell are you talking about pokemon sucks the big one so delete that part and make a new version. MY GOD!
DragonballM 2006-01-29 ch 1, anon.	abusethe disclaimer was not needed in fact I wouldn't have made the conection to pokemon if you didn't mention it. It was alright but I felt that it jumped around too much. A part from that it was good keep working at it.