So beautiful, perfect and spot on. Almost poetic in the end. Weasley Granger Potter Heart mind and soul

I really liked this. I think you captured the essence of Ron, Hermione and Harry. You describe them quite well in a third person kind of way, someone who isn't really with them the majority of the time. I wish you had brought up more the relationship between Ron and Hermione since you did the other relationships, but it was still good.

I love how you show all that Ron is. So many people just shove him to the side even though he has a major role in the trio's friendship. You captured that and I love the Heart, Mind and Soul, I never thought of it like that, but it's very true.

Great job on this.

Truly Extraordinary.

Wonderful. :)

O.O Good grammar? At The world must be ending...

Hehe. Seriously, though, sometimes it's just so hard to find well written stuff on this site.

Great analysis; t'would be one hell of an English paper. I think you got everyone down extremely well, and the ending sentence was just wonderful ^^. Keep up the good work.

weird...but kinda sweet
and i really liked the bit about heart mind and soul
tc!

Awesome piece of fanfic! An extraordinary view on the trio's friendship.

This was wonderful! Very unique! I like how you showcased their temperments in how they write...including the graphology! Cool :-) (Will check out more of your stuff when I have some time).

An unusual and well thought-out story. I like the way you deal with stuff that is normally glossed over in the book (half-transfigured animals? Alert the PETA! ;-) ).
On the minus side, the story is a tad longer than it ought to, and you could make your writing style more personal and captivating.
I suggest that you get a beta for your stories, because you have sound ideas that deserve to be rendered well.