*sniff*

such a pretty story.

i'd like to think that's how she would see things.

i love neville, he's a great character :)

i'm adding this to my favourite stories list and it'll be the first one that isn't a zelda fic!

Very touching- I especially like this one.

Sweet and sad. In character too. Paper flowers...

That's beautiful. I went all tingly, which is what happens when I read a really heartwarming story.

One nitpick, however. You have a bit of a problem with your punctuation that is quite distracting: when you finish dialogue with "he said", "he whispered" etc., you can't start a new sentence. Hmm, that doesn't really make sense... I'll give an example.

"I'm scared." His voice answers.

This is wrong punctuation, because they're two separate sentences; it sounds like "I'm scared. His voice answers". The correct punctuation would be this:

"I'm scared," his voice answers.

Make sense? Sorry about the bad explanation.

That's just heartwrenching! Great imagery with the wrappers there, very effective.

very lovely liked it a lot

*sobbing hysterically* This was beautiful!

That is so cute and so original [for a fanfiction of course]

Finally not one of those slashy/slashy favourite character stories.

I love it. So short but oh well, we get the point.

xD

OH MY GOSH I LOVED THAT! This is the first story I have read that actually doesnt include a main Character in their story. GOOD JOB! Now keep it going PLEASE!

*Kait*