I like all three chapters. Poor Buffy, I really feel for her.

Ooh, an unexpected surprise chapter! I adore this little story, and this chapter fit perfectly in the mood of it. I like the idea of Buffy not knowing her place anymore, of looking back at herself years ago and hardly even recognizing that girl as the same person. Not belonging in the sun but not the night either.

:) Wonderful. I still love the hair comments for some realloy odd reason. But this was great. I love the juxtaposition (I love that word, too) of the sunlight and shadows. And the end was great. Beautiful fic, I must say. I might actually start liking Buffy now . . . *thinks about it for a minute* Ok. I like YOUR Buffy. ;)

Wow.. I don't know how you did it but you just put into words what I think is esentially Buffy from seasons 6 and 7. You did it in such a beautiful way too, it's almost morbidly poetic. Also, the words you use to describe Spike and Angel throughout the chapters once again just capture them and their relationship with Buffy. I'm rereading it again right now and it's just as good the second time. Please keep writing.. whether it's this story or another (hopefully buffy)
Thanks : Love

Ta!

Amy

I need a tissue. You have some gift, my friend. *Sigh* I love your angst. Beautiful.

Look! I'm catching up! :) Wonderful imagery. I must say, I am not a Buffy fan but the way you write her . . . I want to give her a big hug. That is one huge compliment, coming from me.

Incredible story. The narration was so lyrical and beautiful to read, and you got into Buffy's head so perfectly it was almost real.

Interesting, though I think it would have had even more impact if you'd used bold and/or cursive script tp emphazice.

Wow, that's good!

This is really really good. I like it very much. This IS Buffy, but god I wish she would scream and yell and throw things at those who "love" and want what is best. It is so long overdue. They still don't realize that the road to hell was paved with good intentions as the old saying goes. Maybe this will finally be the one betrayal too many and she'll give them the wake-up call they deserve. Before there is a next time as they never seem to know or learn anything at all.