Hey that's really good. I like this story a lot. It really captures what would be going through his mind, down to the last details. Very well done!

Neat! You really help us understand Palps better.

wow, this is really good- you did an awesome job on Palpatine. it's really interesting. i really like this.

Wow - excellent little ficlet!

Beautiful. I love most of your stories. This was clever. I wondered what was going on behind that carefully crafted face he put on.

You're such a wonderful SW author! I didn't know you wrote here (submitted whatever. Any way I love this story, good hintings of things to come.

Wow! That was really good. Palpatine is so evil...

Very good. I think that it was quite acurate and well written.

great

That was very well-done. I always wondered what Palpatine could be thinking at that moment. Again, good job!

Very nice story! I like the way you explained how Palpetine was able to mask his Dark Side usage from the other Jedi on Coruscant. Good reading.