I laughed so hard XD

Nice, good job.

LOL. Hilarious. I was laughing so hard throughout the story XD

Pretty good!

"Naruto looked just as conflicted as he was, just as ready to start a fight. “Hey, I saved our—“

And that’s when the door flew open and their enemies charged in after them."


Okay. That needs to be on failblog or something, because that is too funny. And I love that Sasuke made girly noises...ahaha...

Whoa!!

This will always be awesome. :Db

LMFAO!

Absolutely brilliant! Great writing. I particularly enjoyed the comparison between Sasuke and a ravished princess.

HAH! this is utterly lovely. I totally enjoyed it. *faves*

it was short but good.you should make a sequal.

That. Was. Simply. Fabulous. Hot and fun. Loved it. Good work !!

Hahaha this story was AWESOME.
"“St-stop,” Sasuke gasped breathlessly – out of anger, anger -- "
...yeah... anger... I love seeing those little glimpses of what's happening in their minds. Great job again!!~

..Oh man.. I haven't laughed that hard in a while.. ^.^... Great job writing this!

Niicee one ;)