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| RehabReject 2005-11-03 ch 2, | abusei love this story. you write Ryan so well. GREEN DAY ROCKS! |
| The O.C.-oholic 2005-10-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseAnd by the way when I meant City Of The Damned I meant the title of this story when it was first published. Not the song. Sorry I forgot to put that in. |
| The O.C.-oholic 2005-10-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseI can't be bothered to sign in :P Good chappie! The lyrics SO match Ryan's feelings! I didn't know Green Day's lyrics could fit that way. I hope you update soon, I need to know what's gonna happen next. P.S. Wasn't it called City Of The Damned, or is it just me, having a sort of hallucination? |
| Belthazor's Angel 2005-10-15 ch 2, | abuseI'm really liking this fic. Very angsty and I like the Green Day theme that's going on! I liked the end of this chapter too, I'm intrigued now! Please update soon! |
| Simoman 2005-10-15 ch 2, | abuseRealli nice chapter from Ryan's view. UPDATE ASAP! |
| Mr.Tre Cool 2005-10-14 ch 2, | abuseI liked it. And once again, this song really fits with the story. Espcially the Tales from Another Broken Home. IT's good. But wasn't it orginally City of the Damned? |
| Rainygal 2005-10-14 ch 2, | abuseHey! no probs, with the review, great second chapter!! yeah, it made total sense so don't worry about that, loved the little bit bout how Ryan was wearing his Chino gear! Can't wait to see what happens next and where he's gonna end up! Update when you can! xx |
| greenredSD 2005-10-14 ch 2, | abusehi! i just wanted to let you know that i am still reading. yeah, i thought it made sense, and in some parts it reminded me of one of those dramatic monologues!! (haha if THAT makes sense.) anyways i'm glad you're updating quickly and keep it up! thanks |
| BlondeAuthor14 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abuseOMG! loved it but if you stop writing darkness still surrounds i will be VERY upset cry cry. just a random ? dou have an aim sn? if u do mines CaptainOatsChink IM me |
| Mr.Tre Cool 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuseI love Green Day. I think that Jesus of Surburbia or at least this part of it fit your writing. Continue. And I agree Green Day is genius. Good start. |
| greenredSD 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abusehey i love green day! i really hope you continue on with this story because i love the concept and i think it would be really interesting to see where you go with it. keep going! |
| Rainygal 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuseHey! ooh, new story, yay!! Nice beginning, i love Green Day too, so love the idea of loosely basing it on Jesus of Suburbia!! Keep up the good work, really liking it so far!! x |
| RehabReject 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abusecontinue! i love Green Day also and that song is so fitting for ryan's pre-newport life. |
| The O.C.-oholic 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE GREEN DAY! and great idea. I liked it how you started everything out from Chino. Starting from the start of The O.C. Though, I cannot figure or predict anything after just the first chapter...so, I hope you update soon! |