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It's simple. Simple is good. I like short and simple. An excellent foray into the mind of Alice Cameron. Love the bit with the egg. Why the emaciation? Because it fits. Kudos.

It's funny- the whole time I was reading this I figured she was falling apart b/c it was the hubby's d-day anniversary but it never says that does it? I liked the bit with house dropping the egg and her horror, so very Cameron. And this, “I can handle the heat but it was just too bitter.” was my favorite line, also very Cameron, loaded with non-subtle, hit you over the head meaning.

Ah how I envy some House/Cameron writers. The writing's beautiful, simple and angsty. And good Lord, you have a talent for characterization, now don't you?

whoa, this was freaking awesome. and you're only fourteen? well, maybe you're fifteen now, coz the reviews i've read were from last year, but still! i'm fifteen, and i could only dream of writing like you. you have such a deep understanding of human behaviour, and emotions, and i just... i'm so jealous! lol, not really. keep up the excellent work.

-"I'm like a sponge- I absorb information."
-"that's my line"
-"yeah... and i absorbed it."

Whoa...poetic...i think...im not much of literature buff but i do like fanfictions. Good job!

Cheers,
Leogal

This is really good! Do other seasons!

Great work! Is this the first chappie of more or a one shot? Either way, I really like your writing style because it reads like a sad poem yet the reader can see everything in their minds eye and it flows like a story.

Very cool. Liked the repetition. You could make a living off of stuff like that.

Awesome job.

oh my, i'm in tears. that was so unbelieveably sad! but well writen.

well done

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mya

Lovely. Your poetic angst pieces are always so perfect.

I like the idea of Cameron being so on the edge, it's just about the only thing that explains her weird behavior.

Just to add a lighter note, a multi-spectrum light will help with seasonal depression.

Wow...very angsty and deep. I like that a lot.
I hope to see more from you soon!

~SimpleNClean92~

Oh! Angsty! Love the symbolism you have going, especially with the egg. Great fic.

hum i like it very well writen, unlike this review

Kira

"She’s always tried to be part of something." That's wonderful.