|Reviews for The Third Betrayal|
| Sano 1/23/13 . chapter 1
| selena23loveless 6/9/11 . chapter 1
Very nice story! And Hiei is talking a lot...about love too, which is really something!
| xxAwesomeLucyxx 8/21/10 . chapter 1
A Hiei soul purging session. I like it.
| cdkobasiuk 1/24/10 . chapter 1
Wow , that was powerful.
| Shinjiteru 8/24/09 . chapter 1
I probably already reviewed this one, under one name or another. But I have to say it's perfect- reflects both of them so well...
"You're already bound as tightly as you could ever need to be."
Truer words were never spoken :)
| me P 11/1/08 . chapter 1
It made me smile, a lot.
The last line is true, too true.
| Miisao-sama 8/11/08 . chapter 1
:D i loved!
| Fuzzy Eared 7/31/08 . chapter 1
Very interesting take on demonlore - I love how much freedom that gives fanfic authors of this series btw. It's interesting that you chose not to count Kurama's *not* leaving Hiei in the maikai after the Sensui arc as a betrayal. And I enjoyed your bit about the dark tournament. This whole story was immensely sweet without being sugary. I applaud.
| HieiLover2004 11/5/06 . chapter 1
Aw that was cute
| happydemonhobo 8/1/06 . chapter 1
After reading your other story, I went to your profile and found this one. This was well done and wanted to review and let you know. Keep up the good work.
| Jonetsu 7/27/06 . chapter 1
You know, you managed to keep them in character, Hiei was great! It was so sweet and so Kurama and Hiei like, It's not like others, were everything ends or extremely sad or too 'lovey-dovey', It's perfect. Keep up the good work!
| NyteKit 4/9/06 . chapter 1
That was a pretty interesting one-shot. The third betrayal, huh? Interesting comment. Very original. It was written very well, too. I really like how you incorporated what you chose as two betrayals into the actual storyline. That made them all the more believable. Nice job!
| Sachi 1/28/06 . chapter 1
Wow, amazing concepts in this fic, and all that stuff about what happened during the Dark Tournament fit perfectly. Kudos!
| sil-kurama 11/25/05 . chapter 1
you write so well! thaks god for your great imagination! it's really great hearing (well, reading...)hiei say so many things, and admit his feeling in front of someone else (besides kurama, of course) i don't think hiei's OOC, it's just that he needed to talk.
| Kumiku-chan 11/25/05 . chapter 1
That was was pretty cool. A definate fav.