I love this story's plot. I haven't seen any others with Kakashi taking the exam, and if I did, I'd still like yours the best! Please update soon!

Of COURSE it was pornography, LOL. I loved this! Amazing work. I'm more than slightly sick right now, and having trouble thinking straight, so I'm not going to even try to leave something coherent. Um... I love Ippei. I can't believe that you killed off both of Kakashi's teammates! How could you? But it fit in with the storyline, I suppose. The plot is great. I love your characters. Update soon!
LOT7
(I'll leave a better review next time, promise.)

'sgood.

Nice job of maintaining tension in the story.

I've been waiting for an update on this for so long!
Loved it! ^^ You portray Kakashi and Minato so fantastically :D Kakashi especially well =)
I'm prepared to beg for more updates and hope desperately that you don't abandon this amazing fic!

I've always been a secret lurker at heart, but your brilliant fic just *made* me review!

I absolutely love this fic- the writing, the way you write Kakashi (I'm a huge fan of Kakashi, especially when he's written as a 'child'), the way you write Minato and Jiraiya- everything!

I was just wondering though...is Yoshino, Shikamaru's future mom?

Cheers!
-sharpie

Very interesting! I have to admit I was a bit surprised at first. I wasn't sure if the story was going to be entertaining...and then there's the worry that even if it does have a good plot then the writting is very bad...however this one is very well written and has an amazing plot line! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

You did a really good job with this chapter! Im looking forward to the next Chapter :)

This was good!
Jiraiya would agree heartily to your last statement, and Tsunade would have probably punched you to the ground for the same...
I read the entire thing now, and this is for the entire story.
It kinda gave me a really vivid picture.
And Kai - man, I felt - just felt.
Hoping to read more!

P.S - This is one of my sanest reviews...you're lucky (or the opposite, depending - on you, of course)

I really love this story! But the update schedule is killing me. Literally. You are so mean! LOL

:) :) :) XDXD XDXDDX omgomgomg! i love this fic!



“Sensei, can you teach me a new jutsu?” Wide grey eyes stared up at him out of a face still chubby from baby fat.

“Ye- wait!” He glared at Kakashi who looked quite pleased with himself. He was creating a monster, wasn’t he?

loved it!

Absolutely love it! can't wait till kakashi kicks butt in the finals

I can't wait to find out what happens next - it's a grim and gripping story so far, and I feel sad for all the people involved. It sounds like everyone's going to be fighting people they like. I also especially liked Ume's sense and compassion, and how she *still* ended up offering fighting words. :)

This is one of my favorite kakashi stories! Its really great!

Words cannot describe my happiness when I saw you'd updated this fic! LMAO @ Jiraiya's coded porn and Minato being so good at winding up random kids because of his immense experience getting under Kakashi's skin. I can't wait to see what becomes of Kakashi and Ippei's friendship--somehow I think this won't stop at training...

Please keep updating! The Naruto-kick is A GOOD THING so keep it up, okay? It's just so damn nice to read a chapter with such a well-constructed plot line and great use of style and correct English. You are quite talented and I can't wait until you update again!