Great story. Great buiilding of change of ideals. Last chapter was so good.
Thanks,

Why no updates? And barnette?! Lol

Nice story so far. Makes me laugh alot, especially the end of this last chapter. Hope you update at some point :)

I'm a pervert, I freely admit. That said... this story seriously needs an update D:

hey that was a great story hope you plan to finish it thanx

I find your story funny as hell and completely possible. this is one of the best fan fictions that I have had the pleasure of reading, keep up the good work.

Omg man plz update this is getting good.

yo hawk would you please update this damn story i've been waiting for the next chapter since forever dude send my an e-mail if you can't update it

It is coming up on a year since this fine fic was last updated. Please give us moar? Because I want to see the look on Jura's face when Barnette and Hibiki explain to her what exactly is involved in having a man get a woman pregnant. Then again, given her drawings of Barnette and their toy collection, she may not have a major problem with it, which would shock Barnette and Hibiki even more.

Why have you not continued this?! Please continue this!

Arg when are you EVER going to update? =(

Great story so far, update soon please. :)

is the author dead?

it's been almost 5 months sence this chapter came out

Very good story i wish you can continue with it

you have no idea how long i've waited for a barnette and hibiki sex scence please write the next chapter don't mean to sound like i need it but theres not alot new stories coming out so i've been rather bored lately