HEY! my names jasmine*(SNIFFLE)* how come you don't like me?

hi hun, so cool so far, but u most write more please xx

*laughs* nice job!

XD LMAO I LOVE IT! Its hilarious, Write more! I'd love to be that child..o.o wait she reminds me of my chara for DNAngel, Reina, XD their names are simila too..funny how things work that way XD oh well..lol..Good job i luv it!!

-Reina/loast-hikari-child-

wow, I can't wait to see what happens, wrote is quickly.

Tseng is a cheap bastard i will agree with that. Curse and your cliff hangers. there i reviewed now can i have a cookie?

Nice i enjoyed all of the spelling errors in it but the one thing i loved was the coment about the bugger picker it reminds me of advent childern

its really good but you need to get your rear in gear and write more of this one

hehehe Reno's in for surprise i can tell this is gonna be a great story *snuggles* i hope chapter 2..wait *points to end of chpater* if this was chapter 2 then wheres one? *is confused once again*

^_^

Heh, funny stuff so far. I'm looking forward to seeing what Reno's up to.

Yay for new stuff. ^^ Not bad, allthough I think a few people were expecting more -cough-bill-cough- anyways.

8 out10

Kai-chan what is this? I could not make heads or tails of it...maybe I just can't read...

“I have knew you had a sister, boss,” Elena stated.