 KatyaChekov 2009-09-18 . chapter 20Hey, you're alive! ^.^
Ooh, an easy homework assignment! Much, much easier than coming up with an idea for a speech that's due in three days. Of course, it won't be a SHORT story... XD |
 Miriam1 2008-01-28 . chapter 18Just so that you know, I've been reading this fic with great enthusiasm. You are doing an awesome job. However, this one detail...
"Danny is not able to split into two at present. It is likely he never will be."
That isn't true. In the episode where Danny meets Vortex, he not only splits himself into two, but he actually splits himself into FOUR.
It is true that it takes him until the third season to do it, and - admittedly - it isn't very long. (Apparently, it takes a good deal of practice and concentration to get it right for any amount of time.)
But you have to give him credit where the credit is due.
It is fair, however, to criticize fanfiction writers for giving him this power in any continuum before the third season.
-Miriam |
 KatyaChekov 2007-08-17 . chapter 19^.^ Nice job! |
 Manyara 2007-05-05 . chapter 15Iguanas! |
 KatyaChekov 2007-05-02 . chapter 18Wow... That is indeed a very wise way to put it, with the gum I mean. Thanks for letting my character speak out about her obsessiveness! ^-^ Update soon! |
 Devianta 2007-05-02 . chapter 18Good points. Every bit is truthful.
I really like this story. It's funny. When are the DP characters coming back?
Update soon and good job! |
 rosie 2007-05-01 . chapter 1 I really hope you got Miss Cam's permission before writing this. |
 Kraven the Hunter 2007-05-01 . chapter 1Hmm...Promising start. My sister read some of the story you based this off of to me once. I think I may read more of this, but don't take it personally if my reviews stop coming. I kinda have a short attention span sometimes. |
 KatyaChekov 2007-03-03 . chapter 17...Wow. That was mind-boggling. |
 Blue Valour 2007-03-02 . chapter 17Are you going to talk about Danny bashing, or where authors write about making a character miserable just because they get some sort of fun out of it or think it's interesting to have their favourite character trodden on? |
 Fangirl aka Amitra 2007-01-11 . chapter 16 *fangirl scream* I love you Janette Morgan! You're my IDOL! *more fangirl screams* |
 lynn138 2007-01-10 . chapter 16I love crossovers. :P I'm glad you updated this story. It's one of my favorites on the site. |
 The Eternal Newb 2007-01-04 . chapter 15 Loving this story so far.
I'm planning on sending an application to every OFU I can, but this goal is halted by the misbehavior of the registration system of
I've sent in three registration requests now, all on different days, and still no confirmation e-mail.
Hoping to see more soon,
The Eternal Newb |
 KatyaChekov 2006-12-29 . chapter 15The Ghostbusters? ...Wow. Keep going! I want to see what havoc is wreaked! XD |
 Jedi Junkie 2006-12-13 . chapter 1 “God this sucks here I am 23 years old and in another fan fiction school. Why the hell do I keep falling into these things?” I wondered to myself as I walked to my next class for the day Why There Aren't More Halfas with miss Jasmine Fenton teaching. Normally I am not such a bitter person but I had a lot of crap go on this week. First off that ** ember insists on playing her crappy song over and over again with earphones on my head when I try to sleep. All because she overheard me telling my roommates about how I first got into the show.
Flashback
A Very Stupid Guy: So Jamayle when did you start watching Danny Phantom?
Me: I caught the tail end of Fanning the Flames with ember signing her song. The darn thing got stuck in my head and I could not get it out for an entire day. Eventually I downloaded the song and looked up the show on Been watching it ever since. It was like those sirens from Greek myth enchanted me to the point of insanity.
Ember: (from out of no where.) Really I guess you’re my new best friend then see ya in your dreams.
Me: (force senses go crazy) why does that give me a really bad feeling?
A Very Stupid Guy: (Shrugs)
End flashback
“Stupid teenage ecto-freak if it wasn’t for her I would have never came here.” I gripe stomping down the hallway angrily my powers reacting to my mood and wildly lash out at things in my way. Doors, lamps, and lockers start breaking or exploding when he passed. Most students where either thrown or hit by flying wreckage from the angry Jedi uncontrolled emotional force powers. It happens all the time when Jamayle was calm his powers were more or less in control but when angry. Not to mention he had few friends to talk to due to the fact that one he had force powers as apposed to ghost or half-ghost ones. And two he had not aligned himself with any type of moral group like good or evil. Many felt he was too unpredictable. Except A very stupid guy resembled a fairy from another butch Hartman show and seemed to like Jamayle perhaps because he was different himself.
Secretly the two had been forming a plan to escape the school. Jamayle had only escaped one fan fiction school before when he was taken to Haven City for the OFUJD. Of course that was a stroke of luck to many people where making bad fics on the outside that effected the characters inside the city. With Ashelin, Torn and Jak distracted by rouge Mary-Sue creatures he and a few other students where able to escape via sewer system and made it to freedom. “ If only Guy and I could convince a few more students to join us then I am certain we can find away to escape this hell hole.” Jamayle thought to himself mind filled with ideas on how to escape.
“Oh really?” said a sly sounding voice. I know that voice anywhere…it was Vlad’s.
With a sigh I grab my saber from my utility belt and ignite it pointing it at the millionaires direction. “ Listen vampire boy I’m having a long day I don’t want any ** from you!”
“Tsk, tsk such language no wonder Samuel is having a bad day.” Said the evil halfa disapprovingly at the Jedi student. Jamayle balled his fists at the halfa and immediately thought of a million horrible things he would do to the guy if he ever had the chance.
“ Listen I know what you’re thinking, but do you honestly think it would work? You got luckily last time but it won’t be the same here. I now about the problems you have controlling your Jedi powers and the little stunt ember pulled on you.” He said with a smug grin on his face.
“ Jamayle tried to calm himself but found it useless, if he gave into his anger he would be evil and probably lose his life trying to fight the halfa. “ I would very much like to see this blade rip your flesh either human or ghost.” I declared angrily force lighting beginning to charge in my right hand forming around the blue glowing saber.
“ pity you know I could use someone like you. Image that power and my smarts we can really help each other out.”
“ Forget that this is a trick you just want me to get in trouble so you or your friends can torture me like usual I know your tricks.” I said with a hint of menace in my voice. Vlad pretended to be scared of my threat and made a mock scream.
“ Oh the big bad Jedi is going to hurt me help help!” he said mockingly waving his arms around like a frighten woman. “ Come on Jamayle let it go…you know damn well lightsaber can’t harm ghosts if you attack he’ll just go intangible and wait for the blade to pass then summon an army of ghost iguanas on you. You don’t want that do you?” asked my common sense the only true Jedi master I ever had. I decided to listen to it and deactivated the blade.
Once the beam returned into the hilt I placed it on my belt and glared at Vlad. “ This isn’t over Masters I swear I will find away to escape from this viper den.” I declared with a huff before leaving.
As soon as Jamayle left Vlad turned to Miss Morgan how had unexplainably appeared on the scene and two security ghosts walker had provided for the school. “ compared to all the other students this one only seems to want to escape he could be trouble.” Vlad said with a sigh looking at the damage the Jedi powers had caused.
“ Nah, I’m certain we can keep him under control. Besides he never even stepped outside of the building before he won’t run. But I’ll have the security ghosts and iguanas keep tabs on him and have the staff watch his every movement.” She said seriously before disappearing again. |