Very excellent, definite favorite, A

hi i think your story is brilliant i like the way you used your words, and how you made dudley and Harry friends i think you have great potiental to become a really good writer!

love Feltons_gurl2456

Pottermaniac,

I love your story. Careful on the characters though. I think Malfoy and Dudley went a bit too far out of character, unless you meant that to happen. As for a flaw for Cho, maybe her being afraid to be close to someone, with Cedric and her parents. You kind of hinted at that though in the end with the 'Kissing Rule'. Except for a few characters, this was very accurate. Good Job!

Zula-chan

By the way, Ron and Hermione make a really cute couple; That was clever!

Peace!

BRAVO! ENCORE! I LOVED IT!

Hey! I just wanna say that I loved this SO much! I'm a HUGE H/C, D/G and R/H shipper! *sighs* How did you EVER come up with this plot? It's FANTASTIC! I loved Hermione's "Oh honestly!" LOL!

Liz (Evil TeddyBear01)

this is great Cho didn't die!do a sequel

Erm...I *think* her "oh honestly"'s are in the book, but I can't be sure. This was definitely interesting! Regardless of the fact that I'm an avid H/G shipper, I really enjoyed this. Are you planning on writing any sequels? I think this fic deserves one.

heehe, loved the ending.

WHERE do you get to see the picture of Cho? I went to the site but couln't find anything realted to HP. Great story still!

FANTASTIC! This has GOT to be one of my favourite tories here.

Great story! I love h/c fics. It just seems a bit weird that Dudley is kind of acting...nice.

Good. And a flaw to Cho would be that... Well, not really a falw. More a weakness. Like... I DON'T KNOW... *Stares at ceiling in hope of inspiration.* - *2 hours later* - WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH THIS STUPID CEILING! Oh well who cares... At least I gave a suggestion!

P.S. You can bet this story is going to my favorites.

Still breathless. Still dizzy. Still amazed with the power of it all! I definitely enjoyed it! Herm's "Oh honestly!" is her own trademark; in the 4th book they quite prevail. I'm so glad you paired Ron and Herm; they're the number one couple (besides C/C) and it's so obvious it's going to happen. (I knew it from the clues in the third book! But I was kinda disappointed that they didn't get together in GoF...but it's gonna happen in #5!) Anyhow, this story is the one that compelled me to write my most honest reviews. I salute you! Love, CherryBlossom29

My head is spinning. I am literally breathless. This is literally breathtaking- the best chapter I've read so far. What an intriguing story! You are so creative with the Founders' legend and the Relic of Power. Whoa, Lindsay is irrational. I still am hopelessly devoted to Cho/Cedric, but I was touched by how Harry really cares for Cho.