awesome story

Wow, is it really already over? I got so swept up in it I didn't even realize it was over until the last chapter.

So they're supposed to shoot the opponents in the groin?

One of the best fics I have ever read. No joke. Macross and Ranma? normally I would have laughed at this sort of cross but here its done so well! I cannot explain in words the kind of chord this struck. Extremely well done. Relationships, action, humor, tone and pacing were all amazing. To people regarding the negative comments on the military stuff: its MACROSS. That is all.

This was very well done!

I don't know how I feel about this story. On one hand it was well written for the most part and the characters and action was well developed. On the other hand you have what should seemingly be a very dark story and scenario and at times of real loss the characters act in a much more light hearted fashion then I felt appropriate.

While I'm not familiar with the Robotech elements this part of the story was well done and interesting. I find the Zentradi defectors to be accepted a little too easily though. Regardless, you wrote a very interesting story that I very much enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing it.

Right, Ranma somehow didn't notice the differences in body shape between Lisa and her male form and then remained oblivious while she had sex with a man. That's about the most unbelievable idiocy I've heard.

For that matter there's also the moral aspects of Lisa taking advantage of Ranma like that. After such a betrayal of trust I can't imagine Ranma ever being able to trust Lisa again.

The Unicorn

I wish you hadn't chosen to follow canon events so closely, but you did do a good job of doing so. One problem though - while squadron assignments are within the authority of the CAG to decide selecting a CAG is something that even the captain would have difficulty getting away with doing, at least while they're on earth. If they manage to delay it till they're off Earth the captain will be the one appointing the replacement CAG but in either case all Ray could do is give his recommendation and hope it gets listened to.

I have no problem with a military organization that allows same sex relationships among it's members to be publicly acknowledged while still being a competent and effective military. However any military organization that allows relationships up and down the direct chain of command will not remain effective or competant for very long.

The Unicorn

Very nice, I liked the description of the Marines treatment of Brown but I really doubt Rey is so incompetent and idiotic a commander to allow himself to be seen smiling at it.

Also while I found Ranma's thoughts about the amount of trouble she'd get into for smashing the idiot quite belivable, and fit well with the personality shown on the show it does not fit well at all with someone who has as few black marks as you described her to have.

Very nice story so far, although there's NO WAY your heroine would still be a Lt. much less a Lt. J.G with that sort of record if during the same time period her friend managed to get promoted to Lt.-Cmdr. Not at least unless there was a ton of other negative incidents, which actually Given Ranma's impulsive character (which you do not show in this story) I'd find much easier to believe.

The Unicorn

WOW!

Great fic. Very well written and executed. You've clearly put some thought into this and it shows. Great job!

I read this story many, many times and after yrars it's still one of my favorites. I remember reading somewhere about planned sequel? Is it true? I hope it is

I can't help but think that I'd have been completely lost if I hadn't read the Robotech books a dozen times back in my teens. :-)

But even so, this was a lot of fun to read, thanks for sharing it with us.

Interesting story. I hope you start up a sequel pretty soon. I would love to see what hijinks the SDF-2 and its fleet will get into after this. Anyways a great story!