Really like this story! Please update soon!

GREAT STORY! ;) UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Legolas and Eowyn are totally OOC especially in this chapter.Eowyn would never cheat on Faramir and Legolas would never try to get married woman for himself and he never fell in love with Eowyn.You made him act as a some playboy and Eowyn as a prostitute and cheater.Tolkien would be very upset to see this!

Wow, I like, really love this story. They make such a great couple D

And I agree with whoever said it (another reviewer) I'm just waiting for her to have an elf/human baby XD

that is fantastic. i love it!

Very nice, I've considered a Legolas&Eowyn fanfic myself. Or even a Legolas and a woman from Minas Tirith fanfic.. You've definitely covered their urges, haha and tastefully! I like the way you're going about it...Legolas would never just be about sex, so of course he loves her(

Only recommendation I have is to make more time for editing, or have some one else edit it for you. Sometimes, usually when we're in a rush, we writers don't know what tiny errors we've made until fresh eyes have a chance to show us. But other than a few missed letters, I'd say great!

It makes me very sad that there are only 4 chapters.I want to read more of it!

WOW!

update soon! I want to know if they ever get caught!

i'd love to read more

So cute the scene where Éowyn try to deny Legolas.

Now I think someone should find out about them. Gives more drama thing. Could be Gimli or Arwen. They are good friends to Legolas, so I think they wouldn't go totally agaist them. And more scenes with Faramir almost finding out them. Or suspecting of Éowyn being so o.k. with him getting busy.

We need more characters too. Aragorn could suggest that Legolas seems too happy lately and Legolas could say: I just find out what I need. Or something better. Don't Know.

Can't wait for the next chapter to find out. Bye

This is great. I love how you developed the relationship between Eowyn and Legolas and didn't have to do that extreme of Faramir bashing. Because I hate when people Faramir bash!

Just be careful with leaving out letters and such. You could probably just proof read it quickly before uploading it and catch a lot of errors.

Great work! I can't wait for the next chapter!

*clicks tongue*

I'm waiting for her to conceive.

I love your story. It's very well written and i want to see more of it VERY SOON! So update soon or I'll send my flying monkeys after you!

nice story, but really crap ending.