I loved this series! I read it in one day! I hope you continue writing Jak fanfics in the future! I feel like the guy doesn't get that much love now!

I don't want to nitpi... well actually I really, really, enjoy nitpicking. Three words. Sig's Robotic Eye. Just throwing that out there.


Anyway, very interesting situation Jackie is in.

That was very good, an innovative idea and... I liked the way Jak reacted to everything. Very, very good story!

okay I read this a while ago before I had an account and now I'm remembering to review.

TEH AWESOMENESS. I loved it, great idea, great ending, all around kick **-ness. -Winry squee- One of the few JxK fics i liked. And I don't like JxK at all. No offence to anyone. :D

Caya

I would've cried but I don't have tear ducts. Jak is my hero, and for some reason this story got to me in a really strange way that I can't describe. It made me feel happy, sad, lonely, and crowded. I didn't want it to end, at first I wanted to hit you because you took Jak's sight, but now, I think I've changed my mind about that.

cool! that so romantic KJ forever!

If I don't cry, slap me. Well, you can't phisically, but you can do it virtually.

Wow, took me two hole days of non-stop reading but I finally finished it. Anyway, good story! I loved every single aspect of the story! every little detail was perfect!

...even though he never found his pot plant ;P

sorry i didn't review the last chapter, truth is i really only got back into reading today... anyway i can't wait for the next chapter, u left us with quite a cliffy there!

I just found this! OH MY GOD! this is so sweet and warming...yea Jak is normal! LOL I'd like to 'see' Daxter Deaf...Ironic really. any way GREAT ENDING!

Very nice, Quick-demon. A good, well-rounded ending with joy, reflection, mystery, and the all important tying up of loose ends.

You don't know what you've got 'till it's gone.
:)

This is the best story I have ever read. Perfect ending, perfect plot, and great enough for a perfect review. Honestly I never really reviewed for this story in previous chapters, but I got around to read the rest, and wow, I love it, I think I'll have to print this story out and read it again later.
I truely believe NaughtyDog could make a game for this fanfic, and if they did I would buy the game it would be exciting to play and a real treat to watch.
You have great imagination and I think you should really get this story published. It has alot of potental. You'll go far in life if you take a career in writing.
"On your own two wings you will fly..."

Best Wishes,
~JakLover

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*sniffle* I can't believe it's over. It was such a good story. I'm so glad Jack got him sight back. Loved the part where he threw the cane over the cliff. Great chapter.

Wow, just... wow!

This story has been FANTASTIC! Seriously, you should become a writer for Naughty Dog! You have a gift! The secret about Keira really surprised me, but Jak getting his sight back was the most unexpected part of the fic! I could just imagine Jak throwing his cane away, in some sort of slow motion style.

Anyway, keep it up, or else evil chickens will do bad things!