 MysteryLady-Tx 2009-10-16 . chapter 30That was a wonderful story, I really enjoyed it, I especially liked the unique way of handling the dark mark and Harry's curse scare and the fact that it all worked really well together and nothing was just randomly thrown in here and there...
LOVED the GERBILs! LOL...
THANKS |
 T 2009-09-26 . chapter 30 I think a sequel would be possible with Harry teaching, having children, living, helping, adventures with Merlin, etc. Just something to think about. |
 leighargeneau 2009-09-24 . chapter 30Oh wow this story was just great! I really like the style you write with and your ideas were something new and interesting! Thanks a lot for sharing! |
 loretta537 2009-09-14 . chapter 30this was a great story, i love the unique way that harry ended up defeating voldie |
 potter people eater 2009-09-11 . chapter 30I loved this story. I most enjoyed that Harry found a family and especially Vernons fate lol. I don't usually go in for time-travel stories, however this was exeptionally well written. The way Severus changed after the ritual was very well written and thought out. Plus I don't think I've ever read of the mark and the scar being removed in such a way. It's usually Harry removing Sevs mark, it was very creative and believeable within the parameters of the story. An exellent story I hope you keep it up. |
 Sweetdoggie 2009-08-09 . chapter 30Wow! Just wow! What a fantastic story! I love a powerful Harry and you handled this well. There were reasonable explanations and I like how you got rid of Voldemort. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. |
 snapeangel 2009-08-07 . chapter 30sure you could do a sequal, you left it open with (a) him teaching the next year (b) him being like fawkes/merlin (c) the relationship or lack there of with ginny and the relationship between mrs. zimbini and severus (gag on both of those! eeh) |
 snapeangel 2009-08-07 . chapter 28how did they get so many fireplaces connected to the floo network? |
 snapeangel 2009-08-07 . chapter 16since harry no longer has the link to tom, and he still is able to do snake talk, why isn't one of his familiars a snake? (in one of the resent chapters he tells severus he has use a parsamouth password on those doors that hold painful memories like the door that holds the memories of his aunt and uncle...that obviously implies he is still a speaker so why is none of his familiars any form of a snake?) |
 snapeangel 2009-08-06 . chapter 13man, don't know who to feel more sorry for..severus or harry..lol poor guys! |
 snapeangel 2009-08-06 . chapter 8ron, ginny, hermoine, george, fred = 5 not 4...small mistake at the end of this chapter where you keep saying '4' instead of '5'
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 snapeangel 2009-08-06 . chapter 6well well back to 'early founders' time..very cool..was wondering where they went to
very glad the 'scar' and the mark were removed from the two of them..always wondered what all tom did with his mark to his 'followers' besides torture them to come to him or possibly kill them if they ran..interesting
like this alot so far! |
 SlyPuff RavenDor 2009-08-05 . chapter 30That was awesome! Absolutely amazing job! :) I loved it! |
 Messrmarauder017 2009-07-29 . chapter 30I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Legnthy chapters, detailed content, well paced. There aer a few twists I didn't expect, but appreciated. I was initially concerned about the 'overly' emotional Snape at the beginning of the story when they first travelled back, but as the story progressed I saw how well it worked, and how the emotions tied in with the plot. After the rather abrupt start, everything kind of... evened out and I let myself enjoy it more from an open minded POV rather than that of a sceptic. Congrats on a well written fic. -CVQ |
 Harriverse 2009-07-12 . chapter 30 This is going to sound stupid, but I didn't read this sooner because it wasn't marked complete. I figured it was so old and you had written so much that it would never be finished. Little did I know that this wonderful story was just waiting, unappreciated, for so long. It was very good. My only question was how Harry was able to condense 10 years of progress in wizarding advancement into a few short months of study in order to take his OWLS. Did the wizarding world move so slowly that no new advances were made over that incredible time span? Seeing reenactments of homes from that time period, even with his fathers knowledge of things improving, he should have still been a bit behind. Or is it that he was so powerful that what he could do was just that good? Not a criticism, just a point that I had sticking out in my enjoyment of this wonderful story. The last chapter when you finally explained the title of the story was a wonderful surprise that was like the cherry on top of a wonderful sundae. Bravo. |