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| Gimpyslair 2005-10-23 ch 2, | abuseNot bad, it's interesting. Maybe you should just split some paragraph in half, some are long. But except of that, keep continue, I'm looking forward for the next chapter! |
| Hearii 2005-10-22 ch 2, | abuseThat's forever to update? |
| Akatsukilover2010 2005-10-22 ch 2, | abusepoor sango and miroku. pleasue update soon |
| Adana fukettei 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abusewow... I really like this story... I need to up-date mine and maybe post my sad poem... everyone I've read it to tells me ' oh, this is too sad Amber.' or ' Oh my god... how could you write this?!' well, its not that sad but they say it is... keep updateing this is an interesting story ^-^ ~good luck with your first story! ^-^ |
| Hearii 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abuseI think this is gunna be a good fic...hurry and update! |
| alaskanwoman25 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abusethis is very interesting, i am really addicted to Inuyasha |
| Akatsukilover2010 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abusepoor sango and miroku! pleasue update soon! |