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Nando the RPS King
2008-09-13
ch 13,
abuseWow, I can't believe this sat in my inbox so long before I noticed the alert for it. Well, an excellent job as always.

I'm really feeling the anticipation build in this chapter. And that bit about Vincent's intentionally unintentional ways was a nice turn of phrase.

Keep up the great work. I'm still looking forward to finding out how this all comes together.
Hellbandit
2008-09-08
ch 13,
abuseI must tell you that this rates among some of the best fanfiction I have read (next to Penfeather 20's Feathers in the Maelstrom, which I am most definently sure you are aquainted with ;)). Your understanding of Tifa and Vincent as characters are right on the mark. So many fanfic writers create stories and upon doing so, completely soil the characters so as to fit them based on what THEY want them to be instead of what they are tragically, Vincent is one of the most abused in this since, most likely because he is one of the most difficult to understand. The common misconception is to take his demeanor and experiences at face value rather than what is really underneath. However, you have painted him true to character as you have Tifa; combine that with an extremely witty writing style, and you have a damn good fanfic. Keep writing and know your fans are watching you. Now if only I can get penfeather to release that next chapter...
MindTricks
2008-08-31
ch 13,
abuseAww...they're both so shy! Urgh, I want to read more! Great chapter. I'm glad they're both starting to...talk. :) Thanks so much for the next installment! I eagerly await the next!
Tincent
2008-08-30
ch 13,
abuseOh you evil.. evil woman!! You know who you are starting to sound like with these cliff hangers between Tifa and Vincent doncha? Trena!! Don't even get me started on her... lol. But this was a surprise. I honestly had no clue you'd be updating so soon and when I saw the notification in my inbox, I dropped everything I was suppose to do to come read this. And I'm glad I did. The visuals, as always, were spot on. The mental image of those two are still lingering in the back of my head. See what you did? Evil chick... you better update soon or I may just have to sick some ninja pandas on you ;) Kidding
doc
2008-08-30
ch 13, anon.
abuse"what do you do for fun around here?"
"i go clubbin', i get some hookers. i get high, tifa. i get high."
for some inane reason i actually thought you might make him say that... well, anyway.

i'm not late to the party this time! :D

the more i read your story, the more i wish you had a better site to showcase your wonderful talents on. maybe you should make your own site or something. if i can construct a site that no one looks at, i'm certain that just about anyone can! well, unless you actually _want_ people to look at your site, then i can't help you with that (because i know nothing of this)... but i digress...

vincent and tifa are so well characterized in this. now all tifa needs to do is kick some sense into his pretty ** (or perhaps his pretty head, whichever is faster) and all will be well for her intentions. gee, i wonder what poor vincent would do if she just pounced on him?

what a great surprise on my day off! lovely writing style, as usual. you're improving far beyond how i can write, if that makes any difference whatsoever. :)
Timetill
2008-08-29
ch 13,
abuseOh, Vincent, misinterpreting as usual. Though I guess, both of them misread a few things in this chapter. As buildup goes, they're getting closer to the heart of the issue, but it seems they're not quite ready to make the leap. Which, I guess, is true to the way you've characterized them thus far. Looking forward to what you've got planned!
TifaValentine99
2008-08-29
ch 13,
abuseyou finally updated! (and i finally reviewed...) i liked this chapter! update again soon!
AraelMoonchild
2008-08-29
ch 13, anon.
abuseGoddammit, Vincent, just kiss her already! RAWR! That man drives me crazy...
Fantastic work, as always! I love this story so much! One of these days, I'm going to go back over the whole thing and read it from start to end without stopping. Keep up the stupendous work, and please write more soon!
Switchback
2008-08-29
ch 13,
abuseA real heartwarmer to contrast the setting in which it takes place. :) I love the way you characterise Vincent and Tifa, keeping them in character yet adding a unique touch that only you can do. Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Switchback
DragonGirl323
2008-08-29
ch 13,
abuseAh this was a loverly chapter! I just love how you write Vincent. You're brilliant! :]

I can't wait until you update again! Make is speedy okay? :D

Sincerely,
DragonGirl323
Super-special-awesome Pirat...
2008-07-25
ch 12,
abusewat an interesting story
i do hope you update soon i want to see sum vincent and tifa action!

...pirate
TifaLockheart06
2008-07-14
ch 1,
abusethis story is amazing i really love your writing style! keep up the great work!
Timetill
2008-07-11
ch 12,
abuseI'm sorry about your computer! Losing one's work can be very frustrating, and I really appreciate you going through all that trouble to post this. Now, on to the chapter itself.

This made me happy. Very happy. Barrett and Marlene, Dana and Aidan (who may very well be my favorite awkward-boy!OC ever)--I really liked how you dealt with their relationships. The changes in those relationships were quiet, drawing from subtle details, but important. Also, it's nice to the see the ladies in this fic keeping the boys on their toes. And now I'm all warm and fuzzy.
MindTricks
2008-07-11
ch 12,
abuseHa ha...you rock! Sorry your machine went explodey on you (I hate that) and TOTALLY keep writing because I'll have to hunt you down if you don't. And I liked this chapter (and I want more!). It was the awesome. So yeah. 'Til next time, I guess!
~MT
Nando the RPS King
2008-07-10
ch 12,
abuseAll that OC goodness was definitely worth the wait. Excellent as always. I think I have a vague idea where this is heading now. Both Thompsons, Tifa, Vincent, and Dana all in one room would be quite interesting from what I'm seeing here. Pandemonium.

I particularly liked the bridge metaphor. And segments with Barret and Marlene like the first part are always fun.
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