I like it! I have trouble reading poetry (I'm just "special" that way : ), but I thought that these were really good...

It was very well written very gripping...oops sorry about the pun. Keep writting.

Wow, this was an excellently written poem! Right onto my favs list! The use of words was so striking too, i'm really impressed! ~Straight onto my favourites list. I'm off to read some more of your fic now,

~Sayonara!