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| Angry Girl 2008-07-20 ch 16,  | abuseI really liked this, it brings another thought to the whole moment of his life being saved. I always wondered why none of them paid him much attention after the revelation I mean Genis got close to him so fast and he is only young, his thoughts logical and emotional were very believable. Also Zelos noticing made me nod, for he notices oh so much doesn't he? he wouldn't be decieved and him being the one to make him think. 'no not now or not anymore' heartbreaking really. Of course I still smile at the small Zelos/Colette moment but haha this is me :-P I really liked this, and later I shall find that song! *writes the name down* |
| drakonlily 2008-06-07 ch 15, | abuseThis is just sweet. I needed something to make me smile a bit today. |
| Azalee 2008-03-26 ch 14, | abuse:O That ending line is awesome ! It's so cute and so. . . foreshadowing at the same time, really gets Zelos's selfish nature. God, I love your twisted Zelettes, really. *^__^* |
| Angry Girl 2008-03-26 ch 14, | abuseYou say so much here but also so little and that's amazing, you got across how he percieves things and how he always observes what they are doing and him 'not being who she expected' and noticing her smile slip. And her just smiling and falling onto him with complete confidence anyway. Also some forshadowing? with his 'he will not let her win' for his will to do what is best for him has been with him for years and he trusts no one or at least holds them at arms length knowing the damage those close can do. I also liked his comparing her to the old spirits and thinking of how she is and had she always been that way. It must be odd for him in a way he is treated like royalty yet also scorned as well. And she though loved when they know who she is is used and a tool like him. I think and conversation between them about that would differ in ways me thinks. Thank you for writing this :D I'm ok :) kinda ill and looking after my nephew so this was a treat thank you! |
| crazyvegimab 2008-03-02 ch 11, | abuseAww. I don't think I would mind any coupling if they were all written like this. It's just enjoyable and soft. |
| crazyvegimab 2008-03-02 ch 10, | abuseHee. I think I like reading your pieces about Collete more than I like reading those about Presea and Yuan. They're just simple and happy. It's as if everyday joy can overcome even the greatest of burdens. I like that feeling. |
| crazyvegimab 2008-03-02 ch 8, | abuseI'm spamming you inbox. Sorry. I like this idea of a happier Zelos. For him to really smile... that brings warmth to my heart. Perhpas I'm getting to attached to these fake characters, but they give me hope for reality. |
| crazyvegimab 2008-03-02 ch 13, | abuseI like how you write Yuan. He's enjoyable. |
| crazyvegimab 2008-03-02 ch 9, | abuseI needed to read over it to notice the subtle hints you placed through out the piece. It's almost chilling. That last line ties it all up nicely. |
| crazyvegimab 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It's short and cute. A soft reminder of the world of ToS. |
| Angry Girl 2008-02-17 ch 13, | abuseHaha poor Yuan and Raine I bet Zelos got a beating of a lifetime a smack and a kick... several times I do think. Not that he wouldn't deserve it. And Presea unerving him and not making him move lol she wouldn't have been impressed if he had left I don't think. And I assume the dolt in red is Lloyd? :P lol who did he marry? I enjoyed this made me laugh. |
| Amy 2008-02-03 ch 12, anon. | abuseThese are just gorgeous stories :D I love them. I'd have to say I love the Yuan and Presea one, it's just lovely. Anyways, wonderful job and please update soon! |
| Angry Girl 2007-05-23 ch 10, | abusehehe I saw this as more of a friend thing because Colette is like that I think lol and having theif reflexes must be a very lucky thing especially in her case because if you didn't know that she could steal would you suspect her of being the theif? I know I wouldn't lol also maybe i saw this as being more friendship because of my love for Zelos/Colette hehe |
| Angry Girl 2007-05-23 ch 8, | abuseI haven't finished reading yet and they are all amazing short fics truly amazing with the detail you put in but I *had* to review this one as well Zelos and Colette are my fave pairing and characters as they are both great characters who get overlooked really ok I'll read the others now |
| LittleLinor 2007-04-09 ch 10, | abuseHaha, very funny. Regal ticklish... now THAT's a thought... bad idea to have his stomach bare IMO :p Good work^^ |