Only one review? Man, this is worth far more than that :) I quite liked it, I have to admit. And the last sentence is just perfect, hehe.

I didn't notice any glaring abuse of grammar or spelling, so kudos on that :D And, dagnabbit, I just think this is a good story.

Short but very good none the less. I like the interaction between Jim and Blair, and the way the story is told as well.

Excellent writing.