Lovely.

I like this fic. It's got some funny stuff and characters going on. I like that their teacher is a guy; there were only two male characters in the series, which I always thought was kind of unfair, but that's how things always go in anime and manga, isn't it?

Also, I'm not entirely sure what the deal is with the all-girl school thing, since Yukari and Nyamo went to the same school that the other Azugirls go to much later, and there were boys there. Maybe it just became co-ed sometime later?

Oh, and I bet every sports festival Yukari makes bets like this, and I bet every time she jacks up the amount of money in the bet from last year... hehe...

and thus, they lost the duck hunt, getting 0 ducks. at least if i read that right :D

you've got 'even' for 'event' several times in there, incidentally.

hehe. Yogurt alien Chia.

also, praise for the dialog goes here. it's getting a little repetitive and redundant :D [the praise, that is, not the dialog. the dialog is brilliant. consistently. hence the problem. err... not that you should Stop or anything. yeah... something like that.]

ahh, Yamanashi-Sensei, you're so right. Yukari will TOTALLY understand what you're going through *cracks up*.

umm... yeah. good work :D next chapter anticipation goes here.

Yay. Good. Yay for chapter three.

wow. good thing you ended that on a serious note or I'd Still be laughing... and i was starting to have trouble breathing there :D

ya know, reading this chapter, i vaguely recall reading the original version of this, too [i think i remember the detention scene? definitely the 'not if i run you over first' bit]

the secret to good 'Azumanga' humour, so far as i can tell [and, really, the funnest things in any context] is stacking up the Little things. you do that perfectly.

also, why the heck does firefox think 'funnest' is a word, but not produce 'funniest'? as a possible correct spelling when i type 'funnist'? who knows... stupid thing doesn't even know how to spell "New Zealand'...

oh yeah. i really like how you did the whole thing with Hako. funny as it is, something about the whole thing with Kaorin always bugged me, and i always found the best fics about her were the ones where she got over Sakaki and carried on with life. nice to see a different twist on an [at least initially] apparently similar character :D

also, I'm sure the soy sauce deserved it :D

Great.

just a random 'i'm reading!' note here :D

Azumanga Daioh seems to lend itself to good fan-works, i think. you certainly nailed the humour, at the very least :)

did you say you have five chapters redone? I'm really looking forward to reading the rest :D

Aww, poor Chia. This was another great chapter which was just hilarious in parts... especially the intercations between Yukari and Nyamo.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, especially if it has the love letter in. That was one of the funniest bits of the manga.

a good chapter. i like the mix of emotions. it was well done.

as for grammar and spelling, there isn't anything too major but i caught you confusing you're with your in several occasions. for example, you wrote "You're sister, right? Or some family member. . ." when you mean, i think, "your sister" It might be just a careless mistake, and it really is pretty minor, but I just wanna remind you in case you didn't know. you're is short for you are, and your means something in the possession of you, like your car, your house...yeah...

overall, very well done though! wanna see more of your work! im getting a little confused about the OCs though. it would be nice if you can refresh our memory a bit, haha^^

dm: yay, you updated! so, i like the development of the ocs, especially teikos apparent alien obsession. i get the feeling shes the osaka of the new group. er, old group. pre group? anyhoos, the scene at the end is touching, especially yukari willing to use her gambling money to treat chia, even if shes using nyamos money...yes, that makes sense, its yukari. i think the love letter chapter will be hilarious. ciao!

wow, very nice. you certainly seem to have put a lot of time into it. its great. i can't wait to read more of your stuff.

Wonderful so far - you've got the AD-style humor and randomness perfectly, and your protrayals of Yukari and Minamo are flawless. Your OCs are good, too; I especially like Yamanashi-sensei. Yay for non-Mary-sue-ish OCs.
An update would be lovely, though.

dm: its amazing. youve managed to write the style of azumanga daioh, and yet have done it with different characters in a way that it isnt copying the original. wow. the humor is astronomical. i think i love teiko or kaya the most at this moment. man, they only got introduced this chapter! anyhoos, cant wait for the next chapter! ciao!

Just read this awhile ago. Man, this rocks!! I hope you update it soon.

Hako's obsession with Minamo kinda reminds me of Kaorin's obsession with Sakaki...