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| princessesmom 2006-03-14 ch 10, | abusePlease update soon, I miss this story!! |
| celticgina 2006-01-25 ch 10, | abuseWOW!! I love that you have taken familiar characters and played with them like this! I get the feeling you are having a lot of fun with this. It shines through your wonderful writing! NOW, get back to work, I want more! ;} |
| daynaa. 2006-01-25 ch 10, | abuseaww awkward cute! very nice! cant wait for some more! |
| jtbwriter 2006-01-24 ch 10, | abuseThat was great! Very 40's=in a nice way-and I like the "Boy Scout" touch. Woody is Woody in any era and it really is comforting to see! I like Jordan's willingness to think things through here-and her closeness to Woody isn't bad either! Thanks for a good read-now what happens?:) |
| Caylen 2006-01-23 ch 1, anon. | abusei LOVE this story! PLEASE continue! |
| clarkloveslana 2006-01-23 ch 9, | abuseI'm so delighted that you've been bitten by the writing bug again. This is such an intriguing story, kind of like the episode with the cold case of the Boston strangler. Keep up the good work. I hope you give us more info on the background of Woody and Jordan! |
| princessesmom 2006-01-22 ch 9, | abuseThanks for the update. I can't wait for more! |
| jtbwriter 2006-01-21 ch 9, | abuseI was beginning to wonder! LOL! Thanks for continuing-I like Woody's willingness to stand up to Max-and follow up on the clues! Okay-what's there to find in Alabama?:) |
| daynaa. 2006-01-21 ch 9, | abusevery nice chapter, looking forward to more, I enjoy how you add in things from the real show, changing bits and pieces to adapt to your story. |
| clarkloveslana 2006-01-09 ch 8, | abuseOh, what a great story to stumble across. So different and so much like the episode when they relived a cold case. Please update soon. |
| princessesmom 2005-12-14 ch 8, | abuseWe've been so patient. Please update soon! |
| Schwendy 2005-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseupdate! i wanna know what happens! :) |
| daynaa. 2005-11-05 ch 8, | abuseahh liken it! haha i am not confused anymore. i think i was only before because i didn't read carefully enough to notice that it was woody reflecting on the first time he met Jordan and i don't know haha i get it now though, and i like it! can't wait for more! haha i dont think i could write a fan fiction about jordan's mother... haha i dont think im talented enough haha. yes, anyways cant wait for more! |
| jtbwriter 2005-11-03 ch 8, | abuseI like this-poor Jordan having to relive finding her mother-then the guy dying like that...what a mess! I like the basic IC of Woody-he's like now-but a little more humanity! Good update-I hope you can give us more soon! Thanks! Now what?:) |
| Pyroangel32 2005-10-30 ch 7, | abuseOkay, so I stumbled upon this story...Friday night? And ever since, I've been wondering what is going to happen. I absolutely ADORE this story...it's so...awesome. lol. I love the time frame and the descriptions of it--it's so cutely cliche, but perfect nonetheless. Woody and Jordan completely belong in this setting. ha. It's amusing. Needless to say, I think this story is ABSOLUTELY amazing. And, instead of thinking about work like I should be, I keep thinking about what's going to happen next in this fic. So, please, SAVE MY JOB: UPDATE SOON! lol. I absolutely *LOVE* your descriptions of everything and I *LOVE* the way you've characterized Jordan-it's perfect and true and fits so well with both the setting and the present-day Jordan we know and love. And Woody is awesome. He's got that "good PI" air about him...it's like he's fighting crime on the streets of Boston and you just want to cheer him on. Plus, you want to definately cheer on the relationship between Woody and Jordan. It's got a lot of potential, and you can tell by your writing that there's something there, lurking under the surface--and I want to know what it is. Please don't keep me waiting any longer...it might be disasterous! lol. Seriously, BEAUTIFUL job so far, I desperately want to know what happens next! |