This is so good. I have tears in my eyes still, they're stinging like Hell. It's been so long since a story, any story, has made me feel like crying, and I can't start naming the reasons why this one made me this sad. But I'll try. Ok, so first of all there was the way it was written. I find that for a story to have the desired impact, I'd has to be written well, no errors, good syntaxing, the right words. you pulls that off quite nicely. Secondly, you put in Zoro's feeling really well, the way he always tries to be so strong,but you know that as soon as Luffy's gone, his world collapses, and there isn't anything he can do about it. The last scene is especially touching. I also love the that Ace leans on Zoro for support, but Zoro doesn't want Ace because he reminds him to much of Luffy. It's so sad. But very passionate (that's not really the word I'm aiming for, but I think you get it) Not much else to say other than bravo. It's truly wonderful. ~Freedom Creed

You made me cry ! Poor Zoro ! this was short but really good !

my God!
what a pretty AU-death-fic! I liked it too much!
just pretty!congrets for you!

T_T

You do a great job of capturing the emotions.

Just wanted to send you a message about your ZoLu story 'Heroics'

this fic has to be one of the most emotional things i have ever read

it made me feel so sad, poor Zoro and Ace

i was almost crying by the end of the fic

anyway just wanted to tell you you did an awesome job

That is the saddest story I have ever read in my life, it made me cry harder than any story I've ever read. You are a very talented writer if you can get me to cry this much.

It's a beautiful story, but I want to know, who is narrating the story?

That was so sad! But it was quite well written.

This line:

"The only reason I knew the world hadn't stopped was because the rain was still falling."

So much is summed up in just that sentence. I really like it.

Oh its so sad... and now im reading like each of your wonderful OP stories and reviewing them :)... dont no how long I can keep up that smile befor ei burst into tears its so sad! but one thing i dont understand in the end Zoro killed himself right? cause he couldnt live withoiut luffy? I think so which just makes it even cuter but now ace really is alone... Stupid (guessing here) Nami? for getting Luffy killed, even if it wasnt her i blame her!
Again great story plz keep writing ZoLu your so good at it!

*sobs* T.T
good... job...
*sobs some more*

This is so beautiful and dramatic fanfic. I really started crying when I was reading this. :') The first thing in the internet that ever made me cry.

I'm so sad now I'm crying. It was so beautifully written it's almost impossible not to cry.

kkya ;-; so sad! but such a good story~ made me cry, just about, wah so good ><

-amy

Aww! *sobs* Zoro!! Noo, Luffy, why did you die?
Awesome fic. loved how Ace was acting and Zoro too. And how Zoro described the girl that Luffy saved.

You know, my friend's neighbor apparently had some disorder or something. I forgot what it was called. But I guess it made her cry at damn near everything. There were meds for it, but when she didn't take them she'd cry at every sad thing she watched or read. Couldn't even watch the evening news, y'know?
I'm starting to wonder if perhaps I don't have this. Or if people are just writing so much more wonderfully than before. Or if maybe I shouldn't just stop reading death-fics, or if I shouldn't listen to sad music as I do so. Or if perhaps maybe there's some other reason you're making my eyes cry.
It's strange, to love something so much, even though it just makes you sad. Is this just human nature? Always doing things that make no sense...
As much as I tell myself to stop, I know I'll always keep reading sad stories. So, you please keep writing them?
-Kloudy Reignfall