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| syntic 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseFor a split second there I almost didn't understand the ending. Almost. Haha, good thing English class comes in handy in these situations. XDI'm glad Zoro didn't end up dying in the war, but poor Luffy; he waited 3-4 long years, of course anyone in his situation would think that their most cherished person in the whole world was gone, oh sweet, silly Luffy. Well done! |
| darkelf1600 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseI have no idea what's going on. There are so many possibilities swirling in my head. I was almost moved to tears in this story. I hope you do update. |
| Kiari1112 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuse0.o... so... either one is dreaming, Luffy knew some one else in the war, Luffys crushed... god all sorts of horrible ideas are popping ibto my haed o-plz let this be a multi chappy fic! hope it is and if so i cant w8 for the next chapter if it isnt ill just say this OMG so sad! but still really really well writen! |
| kaja1234 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseOh, I love this! Update soon! |
| Shinigamideathgirl 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseLuffy died? HE DIED?? OH MAN, that's just too sad. ...say it isn't so... Beautiful writing. |
| Some Girl101 2007-03-11 ch 1, | abuseNo, a cliffhanger! Please update soon, I really want to know what happens next!~ |
| mad. 2006-03-06 ch 1, anon. | abusegrr! you lied! where are the four endings?! |
| zorolover2492 2006-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh, come on! this fic was awsome and you go and leave a cliff hanger like that?! okay, i will forgive you, but you have to put the next chapter up! (i have waited very long for the next chapter i am beging to wonder if you are going to put one up at all) |
| Zorolover2492 2006-02-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou just absolutly MUST |
| Misster. K 2005-12-30 ch 1, | abuse*throws dagger* CONTINUE! such good story should be ended perfectly! please dont torture us..! >_< love how you write Luffy in the beginning... its.. different.. |
| vicious-kitsune 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abusePlease continue as soon as you can. I thought it was a great idea and the way that chapter left off pretty much left me dying to know what was going to happen |
| Alex 2005-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease keep going! This almost got my heartstrings in a knot :'( I want to know what happens!! Great concept for it, definately unique as a fanfiction! |
| Lucid Mediums 2005-10-31 ch 1, | abuseOh, update soon, please! Really really soon please try to update! I absolutely love this, your writing style and ideas are awesome. |
| Anjo 2005-10-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh NO. Luffy didn't think Zoro died..did he?? Oh, please, update soon! Update soon! And keep up the good work, toots. ^^ |
| yakuri-moe 2005-10-17 ch 1, | abuseOMG! what the hell happened after this!?!?!?! I love this pairing, please happy ending (or just don;t make them die or something crazy), i read almost all your other fanfics of one piece and damn, they made me jump out of the window (although mine is covered. And I live on the first floor XD) they were so sad T_T |