An superb story al'Nighter. I would love to read more if you write a sequel, or even a prequel to this story, it was written well and finished nicely. You left a bit of a cliff hanger, giving the sense that you're going to add more. Is this so?
But job well done, keep up the good work!
DarkElf

I love it! This was great. I certainly hope there is a sequel. 'Oriental' elves I assume? Really cool. And the idea that Zak and Jarlaxle are brothers? Very cool. Well done.