Dear Author

This is the fist time I have found your storys and from what I've seen thay seem quite intersting.

the thougt of Kimmy,Ron,and the rest of the gang in Midevil Japan is Quite amusing indeed.

I hope that you'll do some more storys baced in this subject, and will entertain your audience with an uniqe

tails of kimmy.

Scencearly Big Ace 1

fit gets more interesting, great, please update it

Quite a chapter! More interesting takes on characters from the series. I found the events involving Felix to be both humerous and puzzling. His interaction with Frugal was funny, but the bit with Kim in the restaurant was...odd. All that blood made me think the whole thing was a dream, especially after the scene change. Perhaps things will be made clear in a later chapter.

wow... i din't know kim pushed so hard! please update soon!

so here we are at the sequel! i loved the first one and something tells me that this is going to be just as good! is the girl in this story shego because thats what it sounds like to me. update soon!

and so the cast thickens. if i may be so bold as to ask but is this young girl being introduced Shego? and is this counciler Drakken? so many things are left unsaid... man i hate cliffhanggers!

Yay! The sequel, at long last! Well, you've laid some promising groundwork. The introduction of Felix was nicely done. There were a few minor problems with tense changes at the beginning of the narrative, and some phrases repeated two sentences in a row ('cared deeply' among others) but overall an enjoyable read. I do wonder who the dark haired, dark eyed girl is supposed to be. I gather her name is Yami (and you might have Keichi introduce her as such, instead of just referring to her as his niece) but I have no idea who of the KP characters she is supposed to represent. I can wait to find out, though.