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| Tristan-the-Dreamer 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI read the opening dialogue about 3 or four times. It's perfectly snappy, witty, and in-character. And that, my friend, is a true gift. ^^ ~Tris |
| LukeNLorelai637 2006-11-20 ch 1, | abuseNO! NOT END... MORE, MORE, MORE... MORE L/L ACTION... ALOT OF DIRTY L/L ACTION... PLEASE! K-DEN! ...ALOHA BRAH... -Ku'z- |
| GregorySmithIsGorgeous22 2006-02-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat fic!! I'm not always a fan of oneshots, but this one was really good! It's hard to find a good fic that doesn't have Luke and Lorelai out of character, but you did a great job!! |
| J.Stone 2005-12-21 ch 1, | abuseGo for ir!! More, more more!! Nice job. Thanks. |
| Meredith44 2005-10-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was cute. Poor Luke, always so close, but yet so far. |
| Melissa Larkin 2005-10-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved this story! Great job. :) |
| Lynn 2005-10-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww, sweet moment. I could so see this happening. I think it might be deserving of a companion piece (hint, hint). |
| Tale of A Lost Writer 2005-10-14 ch 1, | abuseI like this story. It could really go somewhere. I hope you update |