Erm... Didn't really get it... Uhm... Maybe I'm just stupid but it's complicated to me...

I liked the cycles going on of watching, love, leaving...it never ends. Good job!

So...Inuyasha came back? Or Sesshomaru finally returned again? Because Rin kept thinking of Inuyasha as her half angel and Sesshomaru as her angel and it said her angel returned again...so? Argh, whatever, awesome story anyway...even if I do feel like I should take an aspirin now...-.-

awesome!

Great fic. Wonderful writing, as always. A unique pairing told in a unique way. I really, really like this and all the little twists and the overlaying theme. Keep up the great work!

luved it!

Very profound and unexpected. I adore the underlying theme of cycles and second chances that you've got going, weaving several different ones all into one fic.

It's not a piece of fluff like much of the other stuff out there and I love how the ending is open ended. It could be interpreted as semi-happy as Inuyasha and Rin get another chance and Kikyou hasn't completely won yet, or sad because they're all still trapped in this neverending cycle. That being said, of course I like this version better because your first version ending is more definite, implying the end of cycle. This more recent version ends on possibilites of more to come, which is what cycles.

Ah, enough blabbing. I just want to say GREAT job!

awesome! i dun think i've ever seen this pairing before. guess it's a sort of what if after the inuyasha series ends, huh? anyways, wicked job and i liked this version better than the one on the lj thing.

dun know what the other reviewer was talking about. link works fine if you take out the spaces in the link like you said. guess the person wasn't reading too closely. like read more carefully, dude

To be honest, this kind of irked me. I did, in all, like this very much and I thought it was sweet how Rin had happiness, but.. The first scene where Rin was at the stream, did she think Inuyasha was Sesshoumaru? Because I got extremely confused that Sesshoumaru would miss/think of Kagome, when there wasn't an indication they had come to peaceful and such terms... Eh. And the link thing wasn't working. I don't think that public viewable...

While I admire Kikyo to a degree, I can't help but feel just a bit of loathing at her stubbornness in this situation...But that's the way it works I suppose. She'll never let go of Inuyasha and had she lived on in the clay form in the manga/anime, she would do everything in her power to make Inuyasha's life a veritable hell. Good job! I loved it.