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o.o
2008-01-05
ch 1, anon.
abusewrite more!
J Luc Pitard
2008-01-03
ch 1,
abuseVery sweet piece! (I was reminded ever so briefly of the first chapter of Hikaru no Go and waited for a ghost to appear!)

I love that the hidden history would be revealed to those unable to understand it. The idea of Saitou and Kaoru growing closer due to a one sided correspondence is original. I really like the idea of her going behind Kenshin's back to thank those who help keep him alive. Her snippy tone in the early letter was great!

The use of dialog as the driving force of the fic works well and you've given the characters their own voices so it's easy to follow their banter. This story stands alone well, it's a complete idea and the reader can fill in the details. Nice work.
MiMi
2007-12-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseAwesome! I love this pairing too!
avasion
2007-07-27
ch 1,
abuseyay. that was lovely.
Zerabell Blackborn
2007-01-23
ch 1,
abuseOh, that was beautiful. The way everything pointed to the phrase ‘history repeats itself’. It’s open-ended even if it’s not. Hm, that perhaps makes no since so I’ll just leave you with this:

Fantastic; best Saitou and Kaoru centered fic I have come across in four years worth of looking.
lana
2006-01-01
ch 1, anon.
abusegreat!
Sweet Snow
2005-12-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseBeautiful. It's not a style of storytelling seen everyday especially in the Saitou/Kaoru section. I hope you do a longer Saitou/Kaoru someday - yours are the absolute best!
Starian Princess
2005-12-27
ch 1,
abuseThat was simply beautiful. It only proves that this odd pairing stands as good a chance as any other. I do hope more writers find it in themselves to explore the RK world further, in terms of the romance of course. There are so many "what if's" in this world and you have distinctly displayed a very good way to approach this one. *bows* I sure hope you write more.
SEC
2005-11-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseFABULOUS

"your" Kaoru is even better than the manga/anime version

creative.techinically superb.inspired
hajimenokizu
2005-11-26
ch 1,
abuseOMG... You are so good... I am starting to really like this pairing. *cries* I read your Velvet Wolf too. *shakes head* I wish I can write poignantly as this. I'm adding this fic to my C2 and my fav list and you've made my favorite authors list too.
Warg
2005-10-30
ch 1,
abuse*knocking myself on the head with a bokken* Ur story was really gud, *Soujiro style smile*

Nah i can't do it, i just can't take kao not being all kenshi's, i apologize*bows*

And now for the review*Dum Dum Dum*

1 i never met a jap 9 yr old, let alone a ruroken descendant but don't u think the words chronological order wer a lil out of order.
2 this story has been written in 1 of my fav styles, all immersive i mean. But it wud hav been so much better had u added a few flashback scenes
3 i hate u, *sniff sniff* u and ur damn 1 shots and any1 else with 1 shots.

Wait um srry for that its 4 am so u really can't blame me, or i hope u don't.

Oh by the way if this is a 1 shot wud u get around 2 readin this review??*Anger Marks, slowly replaced by tears*

Buh bye.
NiChee
2005-10-22
ch 1,
abuseWOW. luv it!
Triste1
2005-10-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseWell, that was interesting, and certainly unique. I give you a thumbs up for the creativity of the fic. I can't say I've ever read anything quite like it before. The situations of "what might have happened" is subtly dropped and hinted at, and I commend you on your unique style of twisting things. Keep writing and best of luck to you with future chapters.
Miyu
2005-10-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseSquee! Squee! Squee! I loved this. The details. Everything! I especially loved how the letters were addressed and gradually changed. It showed how much more comfortable Kaoru was getting with Saitou over time.

WONDERFUL
Koorime13
2005-10-15
ch 1,
abuse... This is one story I'll remember as an eyecatcher. It's very well written next to a few errors but that is compensated by the beautiful way the story's put together.
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