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Reviews For: The Visit
dreamofdesire 2006-09-09 . chapter 1
Awesome one-shot!
KeitaWolf 2005-11-07 . chapter 1
OH! The DRAMA!

Don't leave this as a one-parter! UPDATE SOON!!
ChaiGrl 2005-10-14 . chapter 1
A really good short story. It would be an awsome twist if it really did happen. LOL. Keep up the great writing!
solidad 2005-10-14 . chapter 1
mary-sue. Not too poorly written however but the trend of mary-sues has got to end somewhere.
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