|Reviews for Harry Potter: Keeper of the Dark Heart|
| Danielle 1/10/06 . chapter 10
Ingenius. You are a creative and talented writer. I've seen much talent, but little originality. That is not a compliment I give often. Congradulations on such a marvelous, and absolutely hilarious, piece.
| Daft Angelus 1/9/06 . chapter 10
Updating is needed for my sanity, this story is great. I love it how Harry visits the other Universes.
How many more are there to go?
PLease update soon. See ya from the Daft Clan
| Endru the Night 1/1/06 . chapter 10
I've read your story and i must say i love it. Particular the way u portray Harry. But i also read Jumiku's story and i don't see why this can't be Harry(Deedee)/Ebony(Cassandra).I mean it isn't even truely Incest (They are from different universes for god's sake)
It is more like a truly obscure form of narcissmn(sp.?)
Just think about it. I my opinion this have great potential, i mean all the problems to thicken(sp.?) the plot.
Hope u update soon
Endru the Night
(sry for my bad english i'm german. I can read it pretty good but write...)
| Mrriddler 1/1/06 . chapter 10
haha, I looked at Jumiku's story and his review. I don't think anything Harry/Ebony do would be technically incest. It's more like a very very bizarre form of masturbation with time travel/sex change added in... but considering incest in itself is socially defined, it's a bit ambigious here. In any case, I think we know what your view point is and that's fine. I really kind of like the humorous romance comedy twist this story has and I don't see a great need to have Harry get 'down and heavy' so to speak. It's a hell lot funnier this way. Good luck and keep us entertained.
| Sflatino82 12/30/05 . chapter 10
I love this story and i do hope u will keep writeing on it. I also have to ask you when your going to be updateing Uzumaki Harry cause i really want to see how he gets along with Anko will he filrt with her? will have a crush or her? or will it be love/hate kind of thing? i do hope u might make them fell in love along the line i mean not now hes like 11 but mybe later on in ur story. So i do u update that story soon please.
| damon blade 12/30/05 . chapter 10
(Seating down with a sniper rifle polishing the wood finish on it.)What douse one have to do to get a new chapter for Raven around here? I do enjoy all of your other work really I would just like to get a chapter for Raven thats all, do keep up the work on everything and I promise I want shoot your plot bunnys ok?
| Dark Syaoran 12/30/05 . chapter 10
I didn't actually know what W.I.T.C.H was before reading this but now I have a fairly good idea. Checked a few websites out so I wouldnt get confused to much.
I like Harry's attitude; Dark but not evil. It suits him a lot.
I hope he returns to his own world soon. I like it better when he's there. Plus the girls havnt been in it in a few chapters.
Harry/Hay is the pairing I would like to happen but who knows.
| Firehedgehog 12/30/05 . chapter 10
please continue soon
| dark672 12/30/05 . chapter 10
| JuMiKu 12/30/05 . chapter 10
You have a problem with incest pairings? I used to dislike them, too, but after I read Angel Sanctuary I decided to let love blossom wherever it wants to. *The undead fangirls come back to live (again) and I have hunt the cooing banshees once again*
| Exarikun 12/30/05 . chapter 10
yoo. good chapter. seeing as you're not done with this cross, i had an idea on how harry could handle this sirius when he spouts of next about ebony.
*sirius just ran his mouth off about ebony again, with harry in hearing range*
"so, black, it seems you're still going on about how ebony's evil because she's tommy-boy's daughter. are you the only one in the entire world capable of going against your family, black? because the entire black family is a follower of the pureblood ways. yet, here you are, with the people that are dedicated to destroy voldemort. so let's, for the sake of argument, assume you're truly with there guys, against old tommy-boy. where do you get off, telling everyone that'll listen to you that ebony is evil because of genetics, when you fall in the same category as she does..."
just something that seemed possible for harry to come up with. also, this sirius seems to think of harry as his godson, while he's not even from that world.
"black, stop treating me like i'm your godson. i'm not, and having come to know you, i wouldn't want to be. just because the harry potter of this world is revealed to be cassandra, biological daughter of dear old tommy-boy, doesn't mean she's a different person. you're disgusting black, and anyone who treats my sister like you do can count on me to kick them in the ass.
anyways, just a couple of scenes that popped in my head while reading this. i'm curious on how it'll go on.
just a question tho, ebony, is she now considered gay? i mean, growing up thinking she's a guy must've gotten her interested in girls. but now that her true ID has been revealed doesn't mean her perferences will just switch over to guys...
| anon100005 12/30/05 . chapter 10
This started out as such a GREAT story! Now I won't even keep reading it. Why make it stupid? You were really on to something at first.
| flashfroze 12/30/05 . chapter 10
Just to be naughty and perverted I'll say keep the pairing as Harry/Ebony... I always knew Harry was a narcissist... maybe that's why he hates Draco... ... Ah no matter..
Ok, now that I'm being reasonable again what will the eventual pairing be? You can't just not have one: Harry's surrounded by tons and tons of girls (especially witch - who I believe will still require his... ... aid.) and he's not gay... or he's too young. No matter
You sure you can't be swayed?
Qizard Wurrealias Surratus
| Dollisapi Do Tao 12/29/05 . chapter 3
hola como estas! se q eres una escritora en ingles, pero quiero decirte que es un fic demasiado bueno para dejar de poner un review! felicidades!
hi! how are you? i know you maybe cannot read spanish, but i loved your fic! so i only want to tell you how great it is! this is my rr! so please give me more chapters!
your mexican friend
| korrd 12/29/05 . chapter 10
Great fic. So will Raven come? I can't really think of anything else to write since I'm dead tired right now. Update soon.