You wrote something about Jenova... How the hell did I miss this the last time I visited your profile...? Oh well, I liked it. Jenova either seemed a tad angry at times or enjoying herself. A little sneer on her profile. The pace seemed set and kept at it. Although, I felt that some of the flow was a little off... My opinion probably. This dealt with imagery in alot of ways. Perhaps you could have built on that more.

Two lines stood ou the most and I'm glad you used them.

And if it doesn’t, all the better

Humans are corrupt.

They can be the basis of another Jenova poem and I think they characterized her the most. The refrence from God was a key chaarcter moment as well.

Cheers,

Sis

P.S You said you liked Kingdom Hearts? Well, do you like Axel. I have three poems by him up and I'm looking for more feedback. Your opinion would be highly appreciated. Drop by if you have the time.