AW!!
soo good, yeah
loved this one-shot!

That was so cute! Arigato for writing!

aw that was a good one! keep writing!

Aww, cute. Sakura found happiness at last. I like that he keeps telling her he won't leave. That's just so...sweet. :)

those three men... hmm, are they Sasuke, Naruto and Kakashi? and does that mean they are dead? That was a REALLY good story line, and everything meshed. well done, seriously, well done.

Excellent. An actual lemon that is written in almost a poetic manner. Much emotion put into that. I'm glad that it kept calling for you. ;) Thanks for sharing it with us.

Okay, so normally, I don't really ship this pairing. But, having written my own ShikaSaku, I gave it another whirl. Sadly, most are lacking. D; But yours...ah, me likee. I'm assuming the three men turning away in her dreams are Kakashi, Naruto and Sasuke?

The only problem I have with this is that at the beginning, you start out in Sakura's POV, but in the middle switch to Shika's and then back to Sakura's. I mean, that's not -bad-, per se, but it's...a little confusing, I guess. Not so much that I'm like, WHOA WAIT WHAT, but it's kind of a jolt out of the story. But maybe that's what you intended. Idk.

Good job! :)

amazing! so much emotion

That was so...TT_TT

Aww, that was so sweet yet so sadT^T What happen to Naru-chu, Sasu-emo and Kashi? Can you tell me please? I'm just guessing that they died. Well they was very nice, and it just makes me like Shika-bum and Sakura pairings even more^_^ You get Shika-bum shaped brownies for the sweetness~~

Sarah: O.O *silent for over an hour* ... wow. so what happened to kakashi, sasuke, and naruto? were they killed or something? but damn, that was one HOT sex scene! your very skilled in that aspect of writing. love it! could ya e-mail me what happened to the boys tho? i like all three of em, and i don't like it that sakura was the last of team seven without knowing WHY she's the last. lemme know if ya feel like it.

the language of this story was simple,yet meaningful in each sentence. very well done!

This story touched me! So sad...I loved it! ^^ Favs!

awesome story

dark deep seductive you captured the suicidal side of sakura perfecly is there more? can there be more?

GaG6