Well, what do you know! I made the sequel already so go grave digging for LEGEND OF ZELDA: THE MASTER SWORD RETURNS!

Love it! I'm waiting for the sequel! I hate waiting, anyways, great story. Oh, when are you going to update A New Hero? Please update it soon. Once again, great story!

WOW!...!...!.!.!.!.! AMAZING! That was a nice touch; i could never decide if Aaron was good or bad...EXCELLENT!

WOW...*stares at computer* THAT WAS COOL...except isn't Lunar supposed to be his descendant? Just wondering, because I've been learning about this on my own...sorry for that but it'll help you! *sorry if you're offended* See ya later!!

That was really cool. I hope you keep on writing!

...the plot thickens...THAT WAS GOOD. I just have a feeling that something is going to go wrong. THANK YOU FOR MAKING ME THINK! WOOHO!

Yes, yes, very confusing I'm sure. The story focuses around Link and Lunar. But mostly Lunar because he seems to not remember anything from the time he stepped into the room with Romanie and Fern. It takes 50 years ahead of what's happening to Link so remember that. Romanie is Romani's great granddaughter, she carried on the farm to a different place. Lunar doesn't really have a history and Romanie is so nice to him, maybe she knew him during Lunar's past but that is not sure yet. I was using 2nd person in the first couple capters because Lunar was trying to figure things out, so after awhile Lunar started to gain back his memory so I transfereed over to 3rd person. Link's story will say more.

Well, its okay so far. Kind of uneventful. And its kind of confusing how you keep switching between third person and second person. And I don't understand how the heck Lunar ended up with Romanie, and what the heck the story is. She keeps acting like she's known him all her life, yet... I just don't get it.

I understand some of you are confused. Link is in Hyrule and Lunar is somewhere else. A sort of place where the new Zelda game takes place. If you've heard of it.

riot,
i think u should write longer:D
Crystal

WOOHO! UPDATE UPDATE! That was one wicked chapter. I thought it was funny that he met Sprite. BUt I'm a little confused. So is he in Termina or Hyrule?

riot,
theives isn't spelled theif's
crystal

WOOHO! Cool take on Romani! I like what you're doing; keep it up!

ello riot,
strange and interesting :D
crystal