Great Start! I can't wait to see how this story develops updaye quickly I really like your writing style.

The only thing that I can think to say to this is something along the lines of: "Oh **. That's creepy."

This is...interesting. What's the old coot planning? Or what plan has he already seen to fruition? I have to know!

I look forward to more enticing works from you.

your summary screams "no ** sherlock!"

Only one word... WTF XD hahaha what a twist end XD LOVE IT

O! This is good! Update update update!! plz? I'll give you a cyber-cookie!

Satisfaction? Ok This needs more!! Awaiting the rest of the story! Please!

Perfect "Oh, **," ending there.

Ended at just the right line.

What! Faint smile of 'satisfaction'? What kind of an annoying cliffhanger-ending is that!

Why isn't this updated?
A bit bizarre twist on a typical Dumbledore-comes-back tale.
I'd like to see an update.
>.>

Very beautifully written ... are you continuing? and why the M rating?

Dumbledore's a tricky old sod, and has more angles than anybody else in the books. I'd bet that he's up to something, and that the Trio are not dead just yet.

Albus knows Harry, Ron, and Hermione are fine or he did saomething to them...so what, is he good or bad?

not bad

ooh. Does this mean Evil/Dark!Dumbledore? This is awesome so far. Can't wait to read more. ja~