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| Reviews for The Love on One's Heart |
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   YaleAceBella12 3/30/12 . chapter 6Please write more... Bella/YaleAce |
| GilmoreGirlsAddict - Rogan Fan 8/10/11 . chapter 6 awsome story please update now |
| BeautifulBlackRose 12/18/06 . chapter 6 I really like it. Please update soon! |
| xxblankcanvas 7/24/06 . chapter 6 Good chapter, and good story so far. I have to say though that you should work on the pov a little more. In one sentence it goes from first, to second and back and stuff. Update asap please! ) |
| coffeeaddict1515 6/8/06 . chapter 6 I like it update, I know that you have not update in the pasted you but please update I want it know what happens nexted. |
| stefi690 5/4/06 . chapter 6 update soon please! |
| kilara 4/22/06 . chapter 6 I like your story. It had body substance. Its like reading a good book. ITs not like some of the stories that have no emotion or anything to them. YOu just need to work on you tense. you go to first to second a lot. Keep up the good work |
| I've Got A Secret 4/12/06 . chapter 6 That was different. Very |
| finnlover 12/10/05 . chapter 6 definitely original :) but I personally prefer stories that is not written in first person point of view. |
| finnlover 12/10/05 . chapter 4 :) |
| finnlover 12/10/05 . chapter 3 Its good. Dunno about a tan rory tho, hahah I like her pale and creamy LOL ! |
| Kylie1403 12/7/05 . chapter 6 he should be 100% honest you ave a great story here although maybe you should get a beta Your spelling is alright but you seem to mix up words and you jump from person to person and charcter to charcter without warning i know everyone makes mistakes (my spelling SUCKS) but yeah |
| rnl1993 11/24/05 . chapter 6 continue please |
| psycholucy 11/22/05 . chapter 5 what goes on between logan and his father. |
| rnl1993 11/22/05 . chapter 5 continue soon. |
