i absoloutly love this...please continue

Very Good! I like the humor in this story. Very original If I might say so! Update soon!

This will be interesting, I'm curious as to how you plan to make character's that hate each other fall in love?? So continue, and update soon!! :D :D

You really should keep going. I think that it's is really good.

Great chapter! I really like how you included Ryou's body language in the library, and Malik reading it so as to avoid stuffing up his conversation with Ryou, that was really well done. Update soon! =D

Funny funny! (in Jim Carrey's voice from Dumb and Dumber) I liked it a lot. Keep it up!

Whoop! That was great, girlie, really awesome! It took you a long time to updated, though I thought it would be forgotten about! But I hung in there.

Anyway, I like where this is going, there are obviously different styles in which Marik (yami) is portrayed and this is one I like. The kind of... kitten-like Marik. But anyway, it's all very good and I'm running late so I have to go!

Goodbye and Goodluck!

Yay I like it! Ryou's the class president that's cool. Poor Malik. He needs a hug, or at least some kind of thick water proof, warm coat thing. Hope you update soon.

This story totally rocks! I love it. You should definately update.

Wow, this is really good. I really like it, and I totally enjoy Malik's POV, not many people do it... Or, what I should say is, not many people do it RIGHT.

But this seems to suit him just fine. Totally on character, I applaud that.

... I remember you're name, you know. You're a popular writer, I think. And you like MarikxMalik, apparently, I like you even more for that.

They're my favorite pariing, you know, so... Yes, I think I'll enjoy this.

As for me, I'm not a romance writer, I specialize in humor. - -U Heh... For some odd reason, my mom wont let me write romance till 16. Luckily, there's a little less than a year before my 16th. I can't wait.

Oops. Sorry. I'm rambling, aren't I?

Sorry, but when I like something I tend to ramble...

And I'm doing it again.

Goodbye and Goodluck.

^^ Very interested in how this story will turn out. I'll be "patiently" waiting for the next chapter!

;You definately need to update. This is the best story I've read on here for a while. I applaud your grammar, humor, and overall presentation. (Holy crap I sound like my teacher. NO!) Anyways, PLEASE UPDATE!

*starts running* You are a quack, Malik! It's a good thing he's not real...right? AH! *gets ambushed by Malik* No, wait a minute, I think he wants a hug *WHACK* nope, he definently wants to kill me...wish me luck!