Awesome Story, great one shot. I like the way you moved everything along and how no details were left out. Plus, the ending was superb!

I have been avoiding going to the Guyver section of FFNet because although I've been its fan for years I didn't know enough about the manga to appreciate the fics people wrote about it. The only thing I saw about it was the action movie Guver 2. Well, thanks to the anime series that was released recently I finally learned enough, enough to follow your work through the story arcs and recognize most of the characters you mentioned.

You made a careful and thorough reworking of the Guyver timeline. The way you placed it in the first person perspective, set in the far future when everything was said and done, gave Sho's narration a slight wistfulness and a calm acceptance over the things that have happened. I liked how you depicted the Lost Numbers as a close family, which wasn't really shown much in the anime for my taste. Agito was who he was. It was Sho who was changed, I feel so sorry for him as well as Tetsuro.

Overall, it was fantastic. I am very glad your story was the one I read first. It's on my Faves list now. Thanks and more power to you.

Awesome

This is great stuff

This is great stuff

Great story! Bit depressing but still great. Didn't think Guyvers could be processed so how was Sho? Or was it because his unit was inactive? How did he go that long without accidently activating it? Sad that you killed everyone off. Will he sleep forever? Where is he drifting?