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Strongheart-Ryowena-Alli
2007-12-25
ch 10,
abuseWhat channal's X Evolution on
AlbinoChocobo
2007-12-03
ch 1,
abuseI love the way you've merged the two--good job!
takuya
2007-10-28
ch 16,
abusei fianlly get around to reading this and that how it ends i dont know what to do
XxDaScenexX
2007-08-13
ch 7,
abuseluvv it!!
Kirara351
2006-12-30
ch 16,
abuseKyaa! That was so good. You know, it took me an insanely long time (3 stories) to realise that all the good Digimon fanfics were written by the same person. I've actually never seen this series of Digimon, but this one is AU, so it doesn't really matter. And now I want to watch the series. Well, the Kouji and Kouichi episodes, anyway.

O_O You're not a fan of Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle, are you? Some parts of your story reminded me freakishly of Tsubasa.
This piccy, for example -> http : // groups . msn . com/ TsubasaReservoirChroniclesOnlineManga/ chapter013 . msnw ? action = ShowPhoto&PhotoID = 335 (remove the spaces) was one of the most heart breaking scenes. The guy loves this girl, but when she wakes up after losing her heart/memories, she says "Anata... dare?"
And this one -> http : // groups . msn . com/ TsubasaReservoirChroniclesOnlineManga/chapter136 . msnw ? action = ShowPhoto&PhotoID = 3240 (remove the spaces again) reminded me of Kouichi handcuffed to the throne in fancy clothes. Then again, I think this chapter of the manga came out after you posted the chapter, but still, the similarities are amazing.

Sorry, I just had to mention that (I'm kind of obsessed with Tsubasa right now. Everyone should read it! Though it doesn't get REALLY good until volume 15...).

Anyway, awesome, awesome fic. Now I just have to read the others... This might take a while, but I will enjoy every moment of it! Keep up the great work! (and start working on the next chapter ASAP, please!)

Yours,
Kirara351 ^.^
Story Weaver1
2006-12-30
ch 16,
abuseBittersweet. well done. I was hoping you weren't going to do some cliche ** and I was not dissapointed. Junpei reiving him was almost completely plausible(Does Kouji's power cut or something else?) and then the memory is good too. For Dusk to be gone Kouichi has to be as well. Like erasing a computer's entire hard drive to get rid of a virus.
Curtis Zidane Ziraa
2006-12-27
ch 16,
abuse*falls over* Yeesh. At least he's alive so they have somewhere to go with rebuilding memories. One more! Let's go!
Kari Minamoto
2006-12-26
ch 16,
abuseLoved it! I can't wait for more! The climax was amazing! Poor Kouji and Kouichi! Update soon!
~Kari Minamoto
Evide
2006-12-26
ch 16,
abuseaugh, the suspence is killing me! *bangs head on desk*
There were so many different ways this chapter could have gone, but it just went somewhere totally different then I had even thought of! I expected Kouichi to lose his memory, but not ALL of it! Or at least not Kouji!
What's gonna happen now? Little, hesitant, not-knowing-anything Kouichi calling his brother Kouji-kun? And... what's Kouji gonna do? Make sure to protect him, right, but then Kouichi would be like... totally clueless! WHATS GONNA HAPPEN?
Well, at least it's something to keep me occupied over break.
~.- happy holidays~ Evide
Catwarrior
2006-12-24
ch 16,
abuseOh, if you promise another, i won't kill you. this is getting better and better but the second anyway, why stop? excellent job!
GaliStar07
2006-12-22
ch 16,
abuseWow, wow, wow, wow, wow! Hooray you did use my idea of having Kouichi losing his memories...but the rest you can make it up. Wahoo! I won't blab out the rest but when I came up with the idea to have Kouichi losing his memories...that..I have no idea of how he did lose them...Oh well, go crazy with the next one! Yeah! This is the best Friday before Christmas Vacation EVER! Please uopdate soon, I just love the way you string the words together to make the story flows...(big grin on mjy Asian face.) I'm dying here! It's so good when you write these down...
krissi-chan
2006-12-22
ch 16,
abuseoh no. the shock must have knocked all the memory out of kouichi. which is really not good.
Stephanie
2006-12-21
ch 16, anon.
abuseNani??!?!?!??!?!?!

What kind of ending was that!?!??!?!! Nyu!!

But that was so awesome!! Please write the final story soon!! I don't think I can wait very long!! Thank you!
Syaoran-Lover
2006-12-21
ch 16,
abuseYou... you! Argh! You... Oh, I don't even have words for this!
I so wish I could kill you right now! >.>
Though I have to admit I never suspected that... ¬¬
Thanks for updating this so soon, but now I'm at a loss if it was a good or a bad thing... XP
Nice chapter, but I still hate you! >.<
ARGH!
Give the poor twins a break, let them be together! God knows they need it! ^.~
Read ya next fic! :D
Ninjauthor
2006-12-21
ch 16,
abusecan't wait for part three of three
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