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| PJC 2008-03-21 ch 1,  | abuseLoved this story It was so sweet for Grissom to make the first (awake) move Well done P |
| mossley 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was an interesting prediction on what would have happened. Of course, the episode was completely changed, but it's nice reading some "what if" stories to get a taste of what we missed. Nice job portraying the subtle start of a relationship between them, and Sara's understated but obvious compassion. |
| lisab1986 2006-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is my favourite version of what could have happened in Gum Drops - awesome story!! |
| Cla 2005-11-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi! I'm Cla from Italy, I really enjoyed your fic... Maybe you should write one or two addictional chapters, I'd like to know how the story goes on! Anyway very good job! Bye Cla |
| CSIslave 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseOH, GOOD FIC! Too bad that they changed it around on us... alas, no geeks sleeping together YET! good fic, though, enjoyed it! |
| spongebob 2005-10-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseif only this really happened, but nice job anyway! |
| untapdtreasure81 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseum the end? how can it be the end...it only jsut began oh please make another chapter for this please? Sassy (who will kiss your feet if i have to) |
| g_lady_01 2005-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwsome, Superb, Excellent...I could go on. You stayed true to the charaters and I could really see this happening. But of course, we all know we most likely see what happens behind closed doors. But we can only hope the writers take a page from your book. Thanks. |
| Denese925 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseI love this story. It is so in character. Great piece. |
| Abby 2005-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseawesome and simply brilliant! |
| perfectcrime 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseLove Ur version. I can't wait for this episode to air, I just hope that TIIC wont screw this up. If they mess this up then I will seriously cry. Some one wrote a story w/ spoiler for this one but then made it a NS pairing, I was bothering me for forever, how do you get an NS pairing out of Gum Drops. Seriously, somethimes you just have to face the facts. |
| selina 2005-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good story. Well-written and believable, but I have one suggestion to make it more believable: You use the line "We’ll figure something out baby. Don’t worry. Try to get some rest". I can't imagine Sara calling Grissom "baby" in this stage of their relationship. Likewise for the "come on honey" line. If you took these out, I think it would be much more subtle and believable. Good job! |
| mbs-ca 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseAwesome, awesome story. Will Grissom blow Sara away and stay? Will he leave trying to forget the need to spoon her again. Tune in for chapter 2 soon? |
| GeekisChic88 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was really good! I loved the whole parallelism between what they were talking about and what they were doing...crossing lines. Very nicely done. I hope this episode turns out like this. |
| jtbwriter 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was good-I'm really hoping we'll get something nice like this-but until then...sigh. Thanks for a very IC story! |