 Wingsong5555 2009-12-13 . chapter 27 Dude, this story is AWSOME! Why haven't you & your friends updated for so long? PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME HANGIN'! *makes the biggest puppy-dog pout in the world* |
 jboy44 2009-06-12 . chapter 27are you going to update soon |
 Ignatia Nox La Gambit 2009-01-29 . chapter 6so out of character it scary |
 Pinkdiamondpikachu96 2008-11-25 . chapter 2this is the best story ever but it needs Sailor moon and Yugioh gx in it to but he should be paired up with ino. |
 David 2008-09-16 . chapter 26 Just so you know, the highest monster level is level 10 |
 ??? 2008-09-15 . chapter 27 It's...it's alive?
...IT'S ALIVE! |
 L's shadow 2008-09-14 . chapter 9 ITACHI HAS SUPERIORS?! |
 Infinite Freedom 2008-09-14 . chapter 27Very nice win on Naruto's part. |
 Moak Strongheart 2008-09-14 . chapter 27 man, that match was exactly like with Joey before and now Naruto had pulled through once again...VIVA LA NAURTO! and also If you have any questions of my new e-mail name then use that address, I might get it...maybe.
MSH [Moak Strongheart] |
 Dragon Man 180 2008-09-14 . chapter 27Hm... I can't help but think that if Yae were to gain a real body she'd be a great teacher for the Kunoichi. I can't wait to see how the rest of the exams go and how Yugi handles things. |
 Dragon and Sword Master 2008-09-14 . chapter 27It's about time you got off your butt and did something! (Not like I can talk...anyways.) Just out of curiosity before I get to the story review, what new movies got you pumped to write again?
Now then, it's a good chapter and I actually liked the conclusion to Naruto's duel and I laughed at when Yae was played. Now if she was like the Dark Magician Girl (transfixed to Yugi in some stories) then that would be funny.
DASM |
 hazlov2004 2008-09-05 . chapter 26Keep on truckin |
 TRICKSTERBEATSALL 2008-08-27 . chapter 26 Please update soon or you will make my inner child cry (points at inner child peeing in the puddle that is really the demon brothers) |
 Isis the Sphinx 2008-08-23 . chapter 26 *Evil, overheated glare*
DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW ANNOYING AND DIFFICULT IT IS TO FIGHT, OR DO ANYTHING STRENUOUS WITH A LARGE BUST?!?! The bust is a sensitive area, and it gives massive back problems. I can understand the large bust for...a good visual. BUT IT'S NOT PRACTICAL!
*more glaring*
I like the Harpie addition.
Could we actually have some story next chapter, even if it's just a couple sentences?
Keep writing! |
 Dragon and Sword Master 2008-08-23 . chapter 26They are a little overpowered, but hopefully the people that Yugi and Naruto have to go through will have something to do with it, or the Shadow Duels that they will play in the future.
DASM |