Awsome! You rock! This story is fantastic! Great job on it! Thank-you for taking the time to write it!

XD HaPPyBuBBleBuRSTer XD

Awe so cute! i love it!

The song/poem fits it so perfectly. :)

Sweet and Spicy. ;)

Wow, so original!

Great song lyrics; is there a melody too?

that was too good. D: i knew it would be, and i had to go and read it anyway. just when i was deciding to cosplay dnangel with one of my friends. GRAH!

(cosplay makes me gay. especially cosplayfanfiction)

luvs, AllE K.

loved it! it was AWESOME! XD

o...it has potential for a sequel...it's so good :)

wow you wrote the song yourself! How awsome I was going to ask who sang it till I read! How awsome song and fic!

X.X *dies of nosebleed*

oh dear sweet meciful Jesus.. i would KILL to have someone sing to me like that. *instant replay in mind* *swoons, favs, and dies again* you are pure genius!

that was so cute, i loved it!

This was awesome! I loved it!

I completely love the lyrics too!

Great job!

Leh

That was beautiful. I really like the song you wrote. It went with the story so well.

Wow was the only thing that processed when I finished reading. I think you're one of the most talented writer's I've ever seen. (More like read the story of) I about died when I realized that wasn't an actual song. I was ready to downlaod it and listen to it forever... Then I read your disclaimer. Find one of the best songs in the world and, turns out, it's not a song. At least not the kind you can download.

I swear if I could write half as well as you obviously can, I'd die a very happy writer. But as it is, I'm not so, I can't die just yet or I'll be miserable. Yikes, that would be boring.

Oh and one more thing, where did you learn to write? I swear, I'm ready to hop on a plane if I have to. You can see everything they bloody do. All those emotions being expressed and it's like... Gr I can't even explain it.

Well anyway, thank you for reading my very long review *coughRantcough* ((If you didn't read it, I don't blame you. XP I get a little over excited. It's the sugar, I swear...))

Love *adoration*

Alyssa

i loved it! you should do a sequel. ] that was a great song. i would love to hear someone actually sing it D anyway good job!

I really like this and hope you ass more chapter to it!