|Reviews for Hunk of Metal|
| Cruelest Sea 5/13/11 . chapter 1
| sallyferrell 10/9/10 . chapter 1
Great one! Very heavy, but it needs to be for that situation they were in. Thanks.
| Rebelcat 10/19/05 . chapter 1
Ah, very nice! I could visualize that all perfectly, and you packed an awful lot into just a few words.
I liked this!
| e-pony 10/17/05 . chapter 1
SJ, you do an excellent job of capturing the power of personal symbolism and the weighty significance of a pivotal moment in two lives. Good writing!
| Starsky's Strut 10/16/05 . chapter 1
Nice. Very nice.
I could picture the whole scene... smell the surf... feel the waves lapping at my feet... hear the sound of two small pieces of metal hitting the water... only to raise a silent, small cloud of sand once they hit the bottom...I could also sense the frustration that caused them to act that way...
Nothing had changed... but everything did.
| Kreek 10/16/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful Drabble. Especially loved the last line.
| Creedo 10/15/05 . chapter 1
I liked this and I picture it post Sweet Revenge. Very touching.
| A-blackwinged-bird 10/15/05 . chapter 1
Wow, those are some powerful words there!