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| Reviews for Hunk of Metal |
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   Cruelest Sea 5/13/11 . chapter 1Excellent. |
| sallyferrell 10/9/10 . chapter 1 Great one! Very heavy, but it needs to be for that situation they were in. Thanks. |
| Rebelcat 10/19/05 . chapter 1 Ah, very nice! I could visualize that all perfectly, and you packed an awful lot into just a few words. I liked this! |
| e-pony 10/17/05 . chapter 1 SJ, you do an excellent job of capturing the power of personal symbolism and the weighty significance of a pivotal moment in two lives. Good writing! Pony |
| Starsky's Strut 10/16/05 . chapter 1 Nice. Very nice. I could picture the whole scene... smell the surf... feel the waves lapping at my feet... hear the sound of two small pieces of metal hitting the water... only to raise a silent, small cloud of sand once they hit the bottom...I could also sense the frustration that caused them to act that way... Nothing had changed... but everything did. Very Nice! -Strut |
| Kreek 10/16/05 . chapter 1 Beautiful Drabble. Especially loved the last line. Kreek. |
| Creedo 10/15/05 . chapter 1 I liked this and I picture it post Sweet Revenge. Very touching. |
| A-blackwinged-bird 10/15/05 . chapter 1 Wow, those are some powerful words there! Great job, Emily |
