hey, good stor so far,

update soon please,

i need to know what happens next.

Oh and if you did make any mistakes describing the molecular structures (i don't think you did though)i would not know (i'm also chemically challenged) :D

GREAT STORY!

Hysterical! I absolutely love this... you're a genius! How on earth did you think this up? hahaha awesome! [favourited... obviously.]

Ella x

Oh my gosh, thats the funniest idea for a halloween theme ever. Not sure my friends would be up for it...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Need I say more?...This story was hilarious. I still giggling at the idea of Catherine dressed as litmus paper. Good story.

Bloody brilliant. My family's staring at me because I'm in complete hysterics...oh, I do enjoy the fatty acids line.

Aw... that was cute! I love the picture thing, that would be cool if they actually did and someone got a picture of it! Good job! You know this story reminds me of "CSI: Party Fever," you should read it!

haha, that was hilarious. I loved Catherine's costume...and of course the ending! Awesome job!

Brilliant use of the challenge lines... and I love the oil and water thing. "Mr Triglyceride" just cracked me up (even though it has been a couple of years since I did Chemistry, and the specifics of such compounds have slipped my mind hehe)