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Reviews For: The Encounter

ContradictoryOrien
2005-11-13
ch 1,
abuseHow true and perceptive... good job.
stupidisstupiddoes
2005-10-17
ch 1,
abuseI like how you write it's intriguing. but kikyou does not hate kagome for all the reasons you state. she clearly does not hate kagome at all. she is cold to her. she is bitter towards her. but that does not instill hate!

I dont think that sango would have kikyo's head like you stated, because sango knows that inu likes her and i believe she feels sorry for her, even though she is kagomes friend. Sango feels that inu is two timing both kikyou and kagome and she feels bad!

I just wanted to make that clear!

but all in all it was a good excerpt. you should continue writing!
EEevee
2005-10-15
ch 1,
abuseI can see where the song would inspire Kikyo. I wish I could remember the lyrics Alex made up about it. They were funny (dumb). And... and I have no idea what to write for this review. I'm so sore... I know! I'll go find more yaoi pics to torment D with. Or I could watch the rest of KP (I'm on episode 33 now! woohoo!)
D: she finds it hilarious that it's turned into a fantasy soap in the music world
Yeah, and *shock* they're brothers... as if I hadn't figured that out way before. You know, Towa is the only one with sense. I need food; I think I'm going to pass out. Oh, I almost got another betta. He was so pretty. Pure white with gorgeous fins... oh well. I'll just have to starve the 6 I do have.
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